List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答时语言不够自然，有语法错误和用词不当，如“rent some goods”应为“write down some goods”。建议简洁明了地表达，避免重复和犹豫。

Ejemplo: Yes, I often make a shopping list before I go to the store to ensure I don't forget anything important.

Sugerencia: 表达不够准确，“hurt me a lot”用词错误，应表达“help me a lot”。建议使用正确的词汇和语法，表达清晰。

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually make lists for my legal work because they help me remember important tasks like revising contracts and submitting documents.

Sugerencia: 句子结构混乱，语法错误较多。建议简化句子，使用正确的时态和主谓一致，表达更清晰。

Ejemplo: Some people don't like making lists because it takes time and they may not be willing to follow the list.

Sugerencia: 回答较为自然，但句子结构可以更流畅。建议使用连词使表达更连贯。

Ejemplo: I prefer making lists on my smartphone because it helps me keep track of my daily tasks easily and efficiently.

× When I prepare to shop in a store, I often rent some goods that I want to buy on a list.

✓ When I prepare to shop in a store, I often write down some goods that I want to buy on a list.

这里的动词'rent'用错了，应该用'write down'表示把商品写在购物清单上。'rent'意为租借，不符合语境。建议用正确的动词表达动作。

× I think my list hurt me a lot to remind me some important things such as revise the contract and some documents they need to submit.

✓ I think my list helps me a lot to remind me of some important things such as revising the contract and some documents that need to be submitted.

句中'list hurt me'用词错误，应为'helps me'表示帮助。'remind me some important things'缺少介词'of'。'revise'应改为动名词'revising'，'they need to submit'应改为被动语态'that need to be submitted'。这些都是代词和动词形式的错误。

× I think there's some reason that some people doesn't like don't like make list.

✓ I think there are some reasons that some people don't like to make lists.

'there's'应为复数形式'there are'，因为'reasons'是复数。'some people doesn't'应为'don't'，主谓不一致。'don't like make list'结构错误，应为'don't like to make lists'。这些都是主谓一致和动词不定式的错误。

× The 1st is make a list often with their time and secondly they often not willing to execute the list.

✓ The first is that making a list often takes their time, and secondly, they are often not willing to execute the list.

'The 1st is make a list often with their time'结构不正确，应改为'...making a list often takes their time'。'they often not willing'缺少动词'are'。这些是量词和句子结构错误。

× I prefer make a list on my cell phone.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my cell phone.

'prefer'后面应接不定式'to make'，缺少介词'to'。这是介词使用错误。