List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then add specific reasons or examples. Avoid redundancy and irrelevant details. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need to buy. For example, last week I wrote down all the groceries I needed, which saved me time and prevented me from forgetting anything.

Sugerencia: Your answer has some good points but is hard to understand due to grammar and unclear phrases. Use a clear topic sentence, then explain how making lists helps you, using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Be specific about how it helps your work.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a to-do list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks. For instance, by listing my tests for the day, I can complete them step by step without forgetting anything, which makes me feel satisfied after finishing my work.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but contains unclear phrases and grammar mistakes. Use clear and precise language, and provide specific reasons with linking words like 'because' or 'for example'. Avoid vague expressions.

Ejemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to rely on their memory. For example, they might feel that lists restrict their freedom and make them follow a strict schedule, which can be stressful.

Sugerencia: Your answer is confusing and contains irrelevant or unclear information. Focus on directly answering the question with clear reasons and examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and avoid unnecessary details.

Ejemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient. For example, I can quickly add or delete items, and I always have my phone with me, so I don't lose my list.

× Yes, of course I made a belief that I go to shop because it make sure what the necessary that I want to buy and it's hard me to respond.

✓ Yes, of course I believe that I go shopping because it makes sure what is necessary that I want to buy and it's hard for me to respond.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'made a belief' instead of 'believe' which is the correct verb form here. 'Go to shop' should be 'go shopping' to use the correct verb form. 'Make sure' should be 'makes sure' to agree with the singular subject. 'What the necessary that I want to buy' is ungrammatical; it should be 'what is necessary that I want to buy'. 'It's hard me to respond' should be 'it's hard for me to respond' to include the correct preposition.

× Importantly, I want to know and I will stay in my bathroom and not.

✓ Importantly, I want to know and I will stay in my bathroom or not.

The sentence is unclear and incomplete. 'And not' is not a proper phrase here; it should be 'or not' to indicate a choice. Also, the sentence structure is awkward and could be improved for clarity.

× Yes, I always make a list of my tests of the day because it helped me to stay on the nice thing and forecast for some part.

✓ Yes, I always make a list of my tasks of the day because it helps me to stay on the right track and plan for some parts.

'Tests' should be 'tasks' to fit the context. 'Helped' is past tense but the sentence is about a habitual action, so it should be 'helps'. 'Stay on the nice thing' is incorrect; it should be 'stay on the right track'. 'Forecast for some part' is unclear; 'plan for some parts' is more appropriate.

× I read out what I need to do and step by step which make me easy to complete my work without any for anything.

✓ I read out what I need to do step by step which makes it easy for me to complete my work without any problems.

'Make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'which'. 'Easy to complete' should be 'easy for me to complete' to include the correct preposition. 'Without any for anything' is ungrammatical; 'without any problems' is appropriate.

× It will be satisfied and lasted after working.

✓ I feel satisfied and accomplished after working.

'It will be satisfied and lasted' is incorrect. The subject should be 'I' and the verbs should be in present tense to express feelings. 'Lasted' is past tense and does not fit here. 'Accomplished' better expresses the feeling after completing work.

× I think some people don't like making this because they prefer to remember things in their own way.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because they prefer to remember things in their own way.

'This' is vague and incorrect here; it should be 'lists' to refer to the subject of making lists.

× For example, they may release on their memory of a contest as they come instead of put everything in house.

✓ For example, they may rely on their memory of a context as it comes instead of putting everything in a list.

'Release on' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'rely on'. 'Contest' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'context'. 'Put everything in house' is incorrect; it should be 'put everything in a list' or 'write everything down'.

× They probably help them to feel like restricted by schedule or more at that time.

✓ They probably feel restricted by schedules or more at that time.

'They probably help them to feel' is incorrect; it should be 'They probably feel'. The sentence is unclear but the intended meaning is that people feel restricted by schedules.

× I prefer making this on my phone because I think it's more convenient and easy to take up iTunes and put down for the short list.

✓ I prefer making lists on my phone because I think it's more convenient and easy to open apps and write down a short list.

'This' is vague; 'lists' is clearer. 'Take up iTunes' is incorrect; likely meant 'open apps'. 'Put down for the short list' is ungrammatical; 'write down a short list' is correct.

× Using a phone is faster and can like add or delete that it's not necessary.

✓ Using a phone is faster and I can easily add or delete items that are not necessary.

'Can like add or delete' is incorrect; it should be 'can easily add or delete'. 'That it's not necessary' should be 'items that are not necessary'.

× However sometimes you look at car it might be a quick load.

✓ However, sometimes when you look at the cart, it might load quickly.

'Look at car' is incorrect; likely meant 'look at the cart'. 'Quick load' should be 'load quickly'.

× You just like lie down idea that your phone is made.

✓ You just like the idea that your phone is made for this purpose.

'Lie down idea' is incorrect; it should be 'like the idea'. The sentence is incomplete and unclear; adding 'for this purpose' clarifies the meaning.