List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more concise and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and reduce filler words like 'uh'. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then explain the benefits of making a list with specific reasons.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me remember what I need to buy and prevents me from forgetting important items.

Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit unclear and incomplete. Try to organize your ideas logically using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Also, avoid grammatical errors and finish your sentences fully to make your point clear.

Ejemplo: Yes, I make lists for my work because they help me organize tasks efficiently, so I can save time and avoid forgetting important duties.

Sugerencia: Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Use precise vocabulary and complete your thoughts. For example, explain the reasons clearly and use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Ejemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they believe it wastes time that could be used for other tasks, or they trust their memory enough to remember everything without writing it down.

Sugerencia: Try to improve sentence structure and clarity. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly and avoid minor grammatical mistakes.

Ejemplo: I prefer to make lists on my mobile phone because I often lose paper lists, and using my phone helps me keep everything organized and easily accessible.

× Certainly I make a list when I shop as I think we should make a list as it helps us to memorize the things quickly and we are able to, uh, realize that, uh, which thing we have to buy.

✓ Certainly I make a list when I shop as I think we should make a list as it helps us to memorize things quickly and we are able to, uh, realize which things we have to buy.

The phrase 'the things' is unnecessarily specific here; 'things' without 'the' is more natural and grammatically correct when referring to items in general. Also, 'which thing' should be plural 'which things' because multiple items are implied.

× Undoubtedly yes I make lists for my work as I think it is a useful thing because if we work and if we have an list of the work that what we have to do next then it will become easy for us and less time consuming process because if we have not a list then.

✓ Undoubtedly yes I make lists for my work as I think it is a useful thing because if we work and if we have a list of the work that we have to do next then it will become easy for us and a less time-consuming process because if we do not have a list then.

The article 'an' is incorrectly used before 'list' which starts with a consonant sound; it should be 'a list'. Also, 'less time consuming process' needs the article 'a' and hyphens to form the compound adjective 'less time-consuming process'. Additionally, 'have not a list' is incorrect; it should be 'do not have a list'.

× Because some people think that making waste is a wastage of time and they should not make make a list as it will waste there a lot of precious time in which they can do another important things.

✓ Because some people think that making a list is a wastage of time and they should not make a list as it will waste a lot of their precious time in which they can do other important things.

The word 'there' is incorrectly used instead of the possessive pronoun 'their'. Also, 'making waste' is incorrect; it should be 'making a list'. 'Another important things' is incorrect because 'another' is singular and 'things' is plural; it should be 'other important things'.

× Or they think that their memory is sufficient to memorize the things and list is totally.

✓ Or they think that their memory is sufficient to memorize things and the list is totally unnecessary.

The phrase 'the things' is better as 'things' without 'the' for general reference. Also, the sentence is incomplete; adding 'the list is totally unnecessary' completes the thought logically.

× Well I prefer to make list on mobile on my mobile phone as I can close paper somewhere as I'm not a tidy person to keep my things organised.

✓ Well I prefer to make a list on my mobile phone as I can lose paper somewhere since I'm not a tidy person to keep my things organized.

The phrase 'make list' is missing the article 'a' before 'list'. 'Close paper' is incorrect; the intended word is likely 'lose paper'. Also, 'on mobile on my mobile phone' is redundant; 'on my mobile phone' suffices.

× So phone is the my preference to make list.

✓ So the phone is my preference to make a list.

The phrase 'the my preference' is incorrect; it should be 'my preference'. Also, 'make list' needs the article 'a' before 'list'.