List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is quite detailed but a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to make your response more concise and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, correct small grammar mistakes like 'make list' should be 'make a list'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do make a list when I shop now because I want to control my budget. Previously, I used to just pick items randomly, but now I prepare a list before leaving home so that I avoid buying unnecessary things.

Sugerencia: Your answer lacks clarity and has some grammatical errors. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'Differences every person'.

Ejemplo: No, I don't usually make a list for my work because I find it hard to complete it on time. Instead, I prefer to work according to my own flow, which helps me be more productive. However, I believe making lists works differently for each person.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but has some repetition and minor grammar mistakes. Try to use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repeating phrases like 'It's better to work'. Also, use singular/plural forms correctly.

Ejemplo: Some people, including me, avoid making lists because they feel it limits their day to specific tasks. Moreover, if they cannot complete the list, they may feel anxious and lose self-esteem. Therefore, many prefer to work according to their own flow.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but has some grammar and word choice errors. For example, 'make list' should be 'make a list', and 'timid kind of person' is not appropriate here. Try to use clearer vocabulary and link your ideas logically.

Ejemplo: I prefer to make my grocery list on my phone because it is easy to carry and I don't lose it. On the other hand, I often misplace paper lists, so using my phone is more convenient and reliable for me.

× I do make it now.

✓ I do make it now.

No correction needed here as 'do make' is used for emphasis and is grammatically correct.

× I try to make list as before leaving my house so that I don't pick unnecessary stuff as.

✓ I try to make a list before leaving my house so that I don't pick unnecessary stuff.

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'a' before 'list'. Also, 'as' at the end is unnecessary and incorrect here. In English, singular countable nouns require an article.

× I have not. I'm never able to fulfill my list.

✓ I have not. I'm never able to fulfill my lists.

If the speaker refers to multiple lists over time, 'lists' (plural) is appropriate. However, if referring to a single list, 'list' is correct. Context suggests multiple lists, so plural is better.

× It's usually because the limit and of the time gives me anxiety.

✓ It's usually because the limit of time gives me anxiety.

The phrase 'the limit and of the time' is incorrect. The correct prepositional phrase is 'the limit of time'. The conjunction 'and' is unnecessary and causes confusion.

× I tend to work with my own flow as that makes it more productive and I can finish my work on time.

✓ I tend to work with my own flow as it makes me more productive and I can finish my work on time.

The pronoun 'that' is less appropriate here; 'it' refers better to 'my own flow'. Also, 'makes it more productive' is vague; 'makes me more productive' clarifies who is productive.

× Differences every person.

✓ It differs for every person.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb. The corrected sentence includes the verb 'differs' and proper structure to convey the intended meaning.

× Those people, as I am personally one of them, tend to not make lists because we don't want to limit our day to that specific things.

✓ Those people, as I am personally one of them, tend not to make lists because we don't want to limit our day to those specific things.

The phrase 'tend to not make' is better as 'tend not to make'. Also, 'that specific things' is incorrect; 'those specific things' is correct for plural.

× We tend to become more anxious if those things don't workout at the end of the day and we become self-conscious about it.

✓ We tend to become more anxious if those things don't work out at the end of the day and we become self-conscious about it.

The verb 'workout' is a noun or a single word meaning exercise. The phrasal verb 'work out' (two words) means 'to succeed or happen as planned' and is correct here.

× Our self esteem goes down if we are unable to complete them.

✓ Our self-esteem goes down if we are unable to complete them.

'Self-esteem' should be hyphenated as it is a compound noun. No pronoun error here, but spelling correction is needed.

× So it's it's better to work with our own flow. It's better to work.

✓ So it's better to work with our own flow.

The repetition 'it's it's' is a typographical error and should be corrected to a single 'it's'. The second sentence is redundant and can be omitted.

× I usually make list only for my grocery stuff so I make it on the phone as it's easier to carry around through me throughout the day.

✓ I usually make a list only for my grocery stuff so I make it on the phone as it's easier to carry around with me throughout the day.

The singular countable noun 'list' requires the article 'a'. Also, the preposition 'through me' is incorrect; 'with me' is the correct phrase.

× And As for a list on a paper I usually I tend to misplace them because I'm pretty timid kind of person so it's better to make it on the list as it's accessible at all times and it's harder to lose.

✓ And as for a list on paper, I usually tend to misplace it because I'm a pretty timid kind of person, so it's better to make it on the phone as it's accessible at all times and harder to lose.

The phrase 'on a paper' should be 'on paper' without the article. 'I usually I tend' is redundant; 'I usually tend' is correct. 'Make it on the list' is unclear; 'make it on the phone' fits context. Also, 'them' should be 'it' referring to 'list' (singular).