List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it can be improved by reducing filler words like 'uh' and avoiding redundancy. Try to make your sentences more concise and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, provide more specific examples to enrich your answer.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go to the store because it helps me keep my fridge organized and prevents me from overspending. For example, last week I planned my meals and listed only the necessary ingredients, which saved me both time and money.

Sugerencia: Your response is relevant but contains many filler words and some grammatical errors. To improve, try to speak more fluently without hesitation, use correct grammar, and link your ideas clearly. Also, be more specific about how the list helps you prioritize tasks.

Ejemplo: Yes, I make a daily to-do list every morning. This helps me focus on important tasks and prioritize them according to deadlines, ensuring I complete everything on time.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but lacks clarity and contains some incomplete sentences. To improve, avoid vague phrases and provide clear, specific reasons with linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ejemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they find it stressful. For instance, they may feel overwhelmed or panic if they cannot complete all the tasks on their list by the end of the day.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but contains repetition, filler words, and unclear phrases. To improve, speak more clearly and concisely, avoid repeating ideas, and use linking words to connect your points logically.

Ejemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's easy to access and update anytime. Unlike paper lists, my phone is always with me, so I can quickly add or remove items as needed.

× I do make a list of items that I need before I go for shopping because this helps me, keeps my fridge organized and at the same time I don't need to overspend my budget on the grocery shopping.

✓ I do make a list of items that I need before I go shopping because this helps me, keeps my fridge organized and at the same time I don't need to overspend my budget on grocery shopping.

The phrase 'go for shopping' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go shopping'. The verb 'go' is followed by the gerund form 'shopping' without the preposition 'for'. This is a common collocation in English.

× As well as that, uh, I will also find what are the things that I need and which are unnecessary.

✓ As well as that, uh, I will also find out what things I need and which are unnecessary.

The phrase 'find what are the things' is awkward and incorrect. The correct structure is 'find out what things' or 'find what things'. Also, 'what are the things' is an incorrect word order for an indirect question; it should be 'what things'.

× So that this helps me to focus on the task which I are, which are prioritized based on the work schedule.

✓ So that this helps me to focus on the tasks which are prioritized based on the work schedule.

The phrase 'which I are' is incorrect because 'I are' is not a valid subject-verb agreement. Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to agree with 'which are prioritized'. The correct form is 'tasks which are prioritized'.

× Yes, some people don't like making a list of tasks that needs to be completed because it keeps them more stressed and at the same time they might get some.

✓ Yes, some people don't like making a list of tasks that need to be completed because it keeps them more stressed and at the same time they might get some.

The relative clause 'tasks that needs' is incorrect because 'tasks' is plural and should be followed by 'need' not 'needs'. The verb must agree in number with its subject.

× They might panic due to the reason that they couldn't finish all kinds of tasks during the day.

✓ They might panic because they couldn't finish all kinds of tasks during the day.

The phrase 'due to the reason that' is redundant and awkward. It is better to use 'because' to indicate cause. This improves sentence clarity and conciseness.

× I personally prefer to make my list on phone because it helps me because it's easy to access and at the same time I could use carry my phone everywhere which helps me to like update the list quickly and at the same time.

✓ I personally prefer to make my list on my phone because it helps me as it's easy to access and at the same time I can carry my phone everywhere which helps me to update the list quickly.

The phrase 'on phone' is missing the possessive pronoun 'my'. Also, 'could use carry' is incorrect; it should be 'can carry'. The phrase 'helps me to like update' is awkward; 'helps me to update' is correct. These corrections improve grammatical accuracy and fluency.

× Whereas on the other side making carrying paper is not a task.

✓ Whereas on the other hand, carrying paper is not convenient.

The phrase 'making carrying paper is not a task' is ungrammatical and unclear. Likely, the intended meaning is that carrying paper is inconvenient or difficult. 'On the other hand' is the correct phrase to contrast ideas. This correction clarifies meaning and corrects sentence structure.