List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi hataları ve tekrarlar var. Daha doğal ve akıcı bir cevap için cümlenizi basit ve net tutmalısınız. Ayrıca, neden liste yaptığınızı daha açık ve detaylı açıklayabilirsiniz.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time.

Sugerencia: Cevabınız oldukça iyi ve mantıklı. Ancak, daha akıcı ve bağlantılı hale getirmek için bağlaçlar kullanabilirsiniz. Ayrıca, örnek veya kişisel bir deneyim ekleyerek cevabı zenginleştirebilirsiniz.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because my tasks are quite complicated and involve many steps. Therefore, making a list helps me stay organized and ensures that I don't forget anything important. For example, last week, my list helped me complete a project on time.

Sugerencia: Cevabınızda bazı dilbilgisi hataları ve eksik cümleler var. Daha doğal ve akıcı bir cevap için cümlelerinizi tamamlamalı ve nedenleri daha detaylı açıklamalısınız.

Ejemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they find it unnecessary or time-consuming. For instance, they may prefer to rely on their memory. Also, some feel that making lists restricts their flexibility.

Sugerencia: Cevabınızda bazı dilbilgisi ve kelime kullanımı hataları var. Daha doğal ve etkili bir cevap için cümlelerinizi netleştirin ve bağlaçlar kullanarak cümleleri birbirine bağlayın.

Ejemplo: I prefer to make lists on paper because I find it easier to organize my tasks that way. I have an agenda where I write things down, which helps me remember better than using my phone. Also, writing by hand feels more personal.

× I make a list because I it's help me remember.

✓ I make a list because it helps me remember.

The phrase 'I it's help me remember' is incorrect. 'It's' is a contraction of 'it is', which does not fit here. The correct form is 'it helps me remember' where 'helps' is the third person singular present tense verb agreeing with the subject 'it'.

× I make a list and before I go to shop.

✓ I make a list before I go shopping.

The phrase 'go to shop' is incorrect. The verb 'go' is usually followed by the gerund form 'shopping' when indicating the activity. 'Go shopping' is the correct expression.

× Some people feel that making list can restrict.

✓ Some people feel that making lists can be restrictive.

The phrase 'making list' is incorrect because 'list' is a countable noun and needs an article or plural form. Also, 'restrict' is a verb, but here an adjective 'restrictive' fits better to describe the feeling. The corrected sentence uses plural 'lists' and adjective 'restrictive'.

× I prefer to make a list on paper because I find it easier to organize my talks that way.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because I find it easier to organize my tasks that way.

The word 'talks' is incorrect in this context. The intended word is 'tasks', which means duties or work items. 'Talks' refers to speeches or conversations, which does not fit here.

× I have an agenda where I like to write things down which helps me remember task better than using my phone.

✓ I have an agenda where I like to write things down which helps me remember tasks better than using my phone.

The word 'task' should be plural 'tasks' because it refers to multiple items to remember. Using plural form is necessary for correct meaning and agreement.

× Writing by hand also feels more personal less.

✓ Writing by hand also feels more personal.

The word 'less' at the end is unnecessary and incorrect here. The sentence is complete and correct without it. 'More personal' is a comparative adjective phrase and does not need 'less'.