List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但语法和用词不够准确，且句子结构稍显重复。建议注意冠词使用（如"a physical stores"应为"physical stores"或"a physical store"），并尝试用更自然的表达方式。

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually make a shopping list whether I shop online or in physical stores because it helps me save money and manage my time efficiently.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，如"it it does work"和"make a made a list"。建议简化句子，避免重复，并使用正确的时态和表达。

Ejemplo: Yes, I often make a to-do list for my work the night before, and it helps me complete all the tasks the next day.

Sugerencia: 回答不够清晰，语法错误较多，表达不连贯。建议先明确观点，再用简单句表达原因，注意时态和词汇搭配。

Ejemplo: I think some people don't like making lists because they find it difficult and feel it makes their schedule too tight.

Sugerencia: 回答中"not on the form"应为"not on the phone"，表达不准确。建议注意用词准确性，并使句子更流畅自然。

Ejemplo: Actually, I prefer to make lists on paper rather than on my phone because I often forget to check them when I'm busy using apps like WeChat.

× Yes, I often make a shopping list when I shop whether online or in a physical stores.

✓ Yes, I often make a shopping list when I shop whether online or in physical stores.

“a physical stores”中“a”是单数冠词，但“stores”是复数，冠词和名词数不一致，应去掉“a”使其与复数名词匹配。

× The reason that I like to make a shopping list is it can not only save the money but also arrange my time well.

✓ The reason that I like to make a shopping list is that it can not only save money but also help me arrange my time well.

句中缺少连接词“that”引导宾语从句；“the money”不应使用定冠词，改为“money”；“arrange my time well”表达不自然，改为“help me arrange my time well”更准确。

× I often make a list for my work and it it does work.

✓ I often make a list for my work and it does work.

“it it”重复，应删除一个“it”。

× I always make a made a list the night before the day and obey the rules to finish the works I had to do the day after.

✓ I always make a list the night before the day and obey the rules to finish the work I have to do the next day.

“make a made a list”中“made a”多余，应删除；“the works”应为不可数名词“work”；“I had to do the day after”时态不符，应改为现在时“have to do the next day”。

× As far as I'm concerned it should be and they might think make a list is a difficult task for them to do because they have to arrange their time more tight.

✓ As far as I'm concerned, it should be, and they might think making a list is a difficult task for them to do because they have to arrange their time more tightly.

句中缺少逗号分隔；“make a list”应改为动名词“making a list”；“more tight”应为副词形式“more tightly”。

× Actually I prefer to make a list on paper, not on the form, because on the phone I always forget to look at it and to check my WeChat more.

✓ Actually, I prefer to make a list on paper, not on the phone, because on the phone I always forget to look at it and check my WeChat more.

“not on the form”应为“not on the phone”；句中缺少逗号；“to check”前的“to”可省略使句子更流畅。