List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih alami serta jelas. Gunakan kata kerja yang tepat dan hindari kalimat yang berbelit-belit. Misalnya, gunakan 'I usually make a checklist before I go shopping and organize it by categories, which makes shopping easier and more efficient.'

Ejemplo: I usually make a checklist before I go shopping and organize it by categories, which makes shopping easier and more efficient.

Sugerencia: Perbaiki struktur kalimat dan tata bahasa agar lebih jelas dan alami. Gunakan kata penghubung yang tepat dan hindari pengulangan. Contohnya, 'I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and prioritize tasks effectively.'

Ejemplo: I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and prioritize tasks effectively.

Sugerencia: Perbaiki pemilihan kata dan tata bahasa. Jawaban kurang jelas dan ada kesalahan kata seperti 'don't make English'. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih sederhana dan jelas, misalnya, 'Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous and enjoy surprises.'

Ejemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous and enjoy surprises.

Sugerencia: Perbaiki kelancaran dan kejelasan kalimat. Hindari pengulangan kata dan gunakan kalimat lengkap. Contohnya, 'I prefer to make lists on paper rather than on my phone, but sometimes I forget to bring my notebook, which can be inconvenient.'

Ejemplo: I prefer to make lists on paper rather than on my phone, but sometimes I forget to bring my notebook, which can be inconvenient.

× Yes, I usually make a checklist before go shopping and I defied the list from the categories.

✓ Yes, I usually make a checklist before going shopping and I divide the list into categories.

The verb 'go' should be in the gerund form 'going' after the preposition 'before'. Also, 'defied' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'divide'. The phrase 'from the categories' should be 'into categories' to indicate grouping.

× It makes me easier to do the groceries thing or maybe the shopping and I can say it.

✓ It makes it easier for me to do the groceries or maybe the shopping, and I can say that.

The phrase 'makes me easier' is incorrect; it should be 'makes it easier for me'. 'The groceries thing' is awkward; 'the groceries' or 'shopping' is better. 'I can say it' is vague; 'I can say that' is clearer.

× I usually make a list for my work and it really helps me to keep organized and make me knowing the prioritization of one another task and it makes me more structured.

✓ I usually make a list for my work and it really helps me stay organized and understand the prioritization of tasks, which makes me more structured.

'Make me knowing' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me stay' or 'helps me understand'. 'One another task' is incorrect; 'tasks' is plural and 'one another' is unnecessary here.

× Well, I think some people don't make English because they already know what they want to do and I think they really love surprises, so it just makes life easier when they have they don't have A to do list.

✓ Well, I think some people don't make lists because they already know what they want to do, and I think they really love surprises, so life is easier when they don't have a to-do list.

'Don't make English' is incorrect; it should be 'don't make lists'. The sentence is also confusing and needs restructuring for clarity. 'Have they don't have' is incorrect; it should be 'don't have'.

× I prefer to make a list on paper instead of my phone, but I sometimes, uh, face, uh, an obstacle when I forgot to bring my To Do List book or and some occasion I need that, but I don't really bring it, so I.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper instead of on my phone, but sometimes I face an obstacle when I forget to bring my To-Do List book, and on some occasions I need it but don't bring it.

The preposition 'on' is needed before 'my phone'. 'Forgot' should be 'forget' to match present tense. The sentence is fragmented and needs to be completed for clarity.