List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cevabınızda tekrar eden kelimeler var ve cümle yapısı biraz karışık. Daha doğal ve etkili olmak için, cümlelerinizi daha kısa ve net yapmalısınız. Ayrıca, 'time consuming' ifadesi burada yanlış kullanılmış; alışveriş listesi yapmak zaman kazandırır, zaman almaz. Bağlaçlar kullanarak cümlenizi daha akıcı yapabilirsiniz.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need. Also, it saves time since I can shop more efficiently without forgetting items.

Sugerencia: Cümlenizde dolgu kelimeler (umm) fazla kullanılmış ve cümle yapısı karışık. Daha doğal ve etkili olmak için, dolgu kelimelerden kaçının ve cümlenizi daha açık ve mantıklı bağlaçlarla kurun. Ayrıca, 'absolute save the time' ifadesi yanlış; 'definitely saves time' daha uygun olur.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it definitely saves time. It helps me keep track of my appointments and stay focused throughout the day.

Sugerencia: Cümlenizde dilbilgisi hataları ve tekrarlar var. 'Making lists are' yerine 'making lists is' kullanılmalı. Ayrıca, 'want to far from this' ifadesi yanlış. Daha doğal ve etkili olmak için, cümlenizi basit ve doğru yapılarla kurun ve gereksiz tekrarları çıkarın.

Ejemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they believe they can remember everything they need to do, so they prefer not to use lists.

Sugerencia: Cümlenizde bazı dilbilgisi hataları ve tekrarlar var. 'Slightly a phone addicted' yerine 'a bit addicted to my phone' daha doğru olur. Ayrıca, 'I can do I can follow my task to do' ifadesi karışık. Daha doğal ve etkili olmak için, cümlenizi basit ve net yapılarla kurun.

Ejemplo: To be honest, I am a bit addicted to my phone, so I prefer making lists on it. It's easy to use and helps me keep track of my tasks.

× And moreover, to make a list is the time consuming.

✓ And moreover, making a list is time-consuming.

The phrase 'to make a list is the time consuming' is incorrect because 'time consuming' is an adjective that should be hyphenated and used with a gerund ('making') rather than an infinitive ('to make'). Also, 'the' is unnecessary here. The correct form is 'making a list is time-consuming.'

× Of course I do UMM to make a list for my work is my absolute save the time and also UMM shows me the UMM.

✓ Of course I do. Making a list for my work absolutely saves time and also shows me the appointments that I need to do.

The original sentence has awkward phrasing and incorrect quantifier usage. 'My absolute save the time' is incorrect; it should be 'absolutely saves time.' Also, 'to make a list' should be changed to the gerund 'making a list' to function as the subject. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× Some people believe that making lists are not not for them because they believe that the they can remember all the things that they really need to do, so they want to far from this.

✓ Some people believe that making lists is not for them because they believe that they can remember all the things that they really need to do, so they want to stay away from this.

The subject 'making lists' is singular (gerund phrase), so the verb should be 'is' not 'are'. Also, 'want to far from this' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'want to stay away from this.' The sentence is corrected for subject-verb agreement and proper expression.

× To be honest, I am slightly a phone addicted and that's why I prefer to make a list on my phone.

✓ To be honest, I am slightly addicted to my phone and that's why I prefer to make a list on my phone.

The phrase 'a phone addicted' is incorrect. The correct form is 'addicted to my phone.' The preposition 'to' is necessary after 'addicted' to indicate the object of addiction.

× It's quite easy and also I can do I can follow my task to do.

✓ It's quite easy and also I can follow my tasks to do.

The original sentence has redundant and awkward phrasing: 'I can do I can follow my task to do.' It should be simplified to 'I can follow my tasks to do' for clarity and correct sentence structure.