List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear but a bit repetitive and has minor grammatical errors. Try to avoid repeating words like 'make a list' and 'tomato' unnecessarily. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, you can say 'because sometimes I forget important items, such as tomatoes, if I don't prepare a list beforehand.'

Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a list before shopping because sometimes I forget important items. For instance, once I forgot to buy tomatoes because I didn't prepare a list, so making one helps me remember everything I need.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by using more precise vocabulary and better sentence structure. Instead of 'different time,' say 'at different times.' Also, use linking words like 'therefore' to connect ideas. Try to be more concise and avoid redundancy.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually prepare a list for my work because, as a student, I have many subjects to study at different times. Therefore, making a schedule helps me manage my time effectively, and it works well for me.

Sugerencia: There are some grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases like 'making believes.' Try to say 'making lists' instead. Also, your explanation can be clearer and more structured. Use linking words such as 'because' and 'so' properly to connect your ideas.

Ejemplo: I think some people don't like making lists because if they fail to follow their routine or schedule, they feel disappointed. So, for them, making a list may not be essential or effective.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but a bit wordy and repetitive. Try to use simpler and clearer sentences. For example, instead of 'my phone is always on my hand,' say 'I always have my phone with me.' Also, avoid repeating 'need' and 'list' too often.

Ejemplo: I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always have it with me. This makes it easier to check and update my list of essentials or groceries whenever I need to.

× I do make a list whenever I go to a shop because sometimes I forget the things that I really need to buy from the groceries.

✓ I do make a list whenever I go to a shop because sometimes I forget the things that I really need to buy from the grocery.

The word 'groceries' refers to items bought at a store, but here it is used as a place. The correct singular noun 'grocery' should be used to refer to the store or shop. This is a singular and plural issue.

× if I want to buy tomato but I didn't make a list of that and at the end of my shopping I I see that I didn't take the tomato.

✓ if I want to buy tomato but I didn't make a list of that and at the end of my shopping I saw that I didn't take the tomato.

The sentence mixes present tense 'see' with past tense 'didn't make' and 'didn't take'. To maintain tense consistency, 'see' should be changed to past tense 'saw'. This is a past tense issue.

× if I want to buy tomato but I didn't make a list of that and at the end of my shopping I I see that I didn't take the tomato.

✓ if I want to buy tomatoes but I didn't make a list of that and at the end of my shopping I saw that I didn't take the tomatoes.

The word 'tomato' should be plural 'tomatoes' because it refers to the items to be bought, which are countable and usually plural in this context. This is a singular and plural issue.

× I need to make a schedule for my study time because I have a lot of subjects that I need to study in different time and it does work for me.

✓ I need to make a schedule for my study time because I have a lot of subjects that I need to study at different times and it does work for me.

The phrase 'in different time' is incorrect; it should be 'at different times' to correctly express multiple occasions. This is a singular and plural issue.

× I think people don't like making believes because if they make a routine for themselves and if they don't go with that routine or the time schedule, they feel bad and maybe making a list for them is not essential like me.

✓ I think people don't like making lists because if they make a routine for themselves and if they don't follow that routine or the time schedule, they feel bad and maybe making a list for them is not as essential as it is for me.

The word 'believes' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'lists'. Also, 'go with' should be 'follow' to correctly express adherence to a routine. The phrase 'not essential like me' should be 'not as essential as it is for me' for clarity. These are incorrect use of pronouns and expressions.

× if they don't go with that routine or the time schedule, they feel bad

✓ if they don't follow that routine or the time schedule, they feel bad

The phrase 'go with' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'follow' when referring to routines or schedules. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and verbs.

× I prefer to prepare a list on my phone because my phone is always on my hand.

✓ I prefer to prepare a list on my phone because my phone is always in my hand.

The correct preposition to indicate possession or holding something is 'in' rather than 'on' when referring to 'hand'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions.

× So it is quite easier for me to look up the phone and just check if I need any type of essentials or the groceries that I really need and I listed them down on my notebook in my phone.

✓ So it is quite easy for me to look up the phone and just check if I need any type of essentials or groceries that I really need, and I list them down in my notebook on my phone.

The phrase 'quite easier' is incorrect; 'quite easy' is correct because 'easy' is an adjective and 'quite' modifies adjectives, not comparative forms like 'easier'. Also, 'listed' should be 'list' to maintain present tense consistency. 'On my notebook in my phone' should be 'in my notebook on my phone' for correct preposition use. These are incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs and prepositions.