List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains many hesitations and filler words, which affects the natural flow. Try to be more concise and structured by directly answering the question first, then giving a clear example. Avoid repeating words and unnecessary pauses.

Ejemplo: I usually try to remember what I need when I shop. However, if I have to buy many items, like for a party at home, I prefer to make a list so I don't forget anything.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but could be more fluent and structured. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid short, fragmented sentences. Also, try to reduce filler words like 'umm' and 'so'.

Ejemplo: I usually try to remember my tasks, but to avoid mistakes, I make a list of work things. This helps me ensure I don't miss anything important.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but has many hesitations and some unclear phrases. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid repeating words. Use linking words like 'because' or 'however' to improve coherence.

Ejemplo: I think it depends on the person. Some people dislike making lists because they can remember everything easily, but I prefer lists because I tend to forget tasks.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but contains some repetition and unclear phrases. Try to organise your ideas logically and avoid repeating the same point. Also, be careful with word choice and grammar to improve clarity.

Ejemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's always with me and more convenient than paper. Also, I won't lose my list like I might with paper.

× Usually I try to remember the things whenever I go to a shop, anything, However, umm, if I have to buy a lot of things, uh, just like, uh, for example, uh, if there is a pooza at home, uh, I have to remember so many things at once.

✓ Usually I try to remember the things whenever I go to a shop. However, if I have to buy a lot of things, just like, for example, if there is a pooza at home, I have to remember so many things at once.

The original sentence incorrectly uses a comma before 'However' which should be preceded by a period or semicolon to separate independent clauses. Using a comma here causes a run-on sentence. To improve clarity and correctness, separate the clauses properly.

× So at that time at things, at times like this, I try to take.

✓ So at times like this, I try to take a list.

The phrase 'at that time at things' is incorrect and confusing. The correct prepositional phrase is 'at times like this' to indicate occasions. Also, the sentence is incomplete; adding 'a list' clarifies the meaning.

× Usually I try to remember things, but it's always good for you to be careful about things that are related to work.

✓ Usually I try to remember things, but it's always good to be careful about things that are related to work.

The use of 'for you' is inconsistent with the speaker's perspective. Since the speaker is talking about their own habits, removing 'for you' makes the sentence more general and appropriate.

× So as to avoid the mistake.

✓ So as to avoid mistakes.

The phrase 'the mistake' is too specific and awkward here. Using the plural 'mistakes' fits better in this general context. Also, this fragment should be connected to the previous sentence for completeness.

× Well, I think it differs from person to person. As for me, uh, who tend to forget things easily, I, uh, try to call, I try to make a list of things that I need to do so that I don't miss any task.

✓ Well, I think it differs from person to person. As for me, who tends to forget things easily, I try to make a list of things that I need to do so that I don't miss any task.

The phrase 'who tend' should be 'who tends' to agree with the singular subject 'me'. Also, 'I try to call' is unnecessary and confusing here, so it is removed for clarity.

× Whereas for people who man who manages to do everything, I don't think they will need, uh, to make a list for what they have to do at work.

✓ Whereas for people who manage to do everything, I don't think they will need to make a list of what they have to do at work.

The phrase 'people who man who manages' is incorrect. 'People' is plural, so the verb should be 'manage' not 'manages'. Also, 'make a list for what' should be 'make a list of what' for correct preposition use.

× We live in a fast Fast forward world where your phone is always on your hand, so I was take my phone wherever I go and it's very convenient for me.

✓ We live in a fast-forward world where your phone is always in your hand, so I take my phone wherever I go and it's very convenient for me.

'fast Fast forward' is repetitive and should be 'fast-forward'. The phrase 'on your hand' should be 'in your hand' for correct preposition. 'I was take' is incorrect; it should be 'I take' to match present tense.

× Rather than writing it on a paper, I find it easier to type it on my phone.

✓ Rather than writing it on paper, I find it easier to type it on my phone.

The phrase 'on a paper' is incorrect; 'on paper' is the correct idiomatic expression without an article.

× The main advantage is also that I might lose the paper, and if I might lose the paper, I won't be able to make the list, so it's better to talk.

✓ The main advantage is also that if I lose the paper, I won't be able to make the list, so it's better to type.

The phrase 'if I might lose' is incorrect; 'if I lose' is the correct conditional form. Also, 'so it's better to talk' is likely a misstatement; 'type' fits the context better.