List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to use more natural phrasing and correct verb tenses. Avoid redundancy by combining ideas more smoothly. For example, say "I usually make a shopping list before I go because it helps me remember what to buy." Also, keep your answer concise and clear.

Ejemplo: I usually make a shopping list before I go because it helps me remember everything I need to buy.

Sugerencia: Focus on clearer sentence structure and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas, such as "For example" or "Also." For instance, "Yes, I make a schedule for my study and practical sessions in physical education. This helps me stay organized and remember important points."

Ejemplo: Yes, I make a schedule for my study and practical sessions in physical education. This helps me stay organized and remember important points.

Sugerencia: Improve clarity and coherence by using linking words and clearer expressions. Avoid confusing phrases. For example, "Some people dislike making lists because they think it takes too much time. Others have a good memory, so they don't feel the need to write things down."

Ejemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they think it takes too much time. Others have a good memory, so they don't feel the need to write things down.

Sugerencia: Use more natural expressions and correct grammar. For example, "I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's quick and convenient. Writing on paper can be difficult, and sometimes the paper gets lost."

Ejemplo: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's quick and convenient. Writing on paper can be difficult, and sometimes the paper gets lost.

× When I go to the shopping, firstly I made the list and note down all the things which I buy.

✓ When I go shopping, firstly I make the list and note down all the things which I buy.

The phrase 'go to the shopping' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go shopping'. Also, 'made' is past tense but the sentence context is habitual action, so 'make' in present tense is appropriate here.

× When I go to the shopping, firstly I made the list and note down all the things which I buy.

✓ When I go shopping, firstly I make the list and note down all the things which I buy.

The verb 'made' is in past tense, but the sentence describes a habitual action, so the present tense 'make' should be used.

× So mostly I make the list when I go to the shopping.

✓ So mostly I make the list when I go shopping.

The phrase 'go to the shopping' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go shopping' without 'to the'.

× Yes, I make a list of my work, what time I study and what time I do practical of my physical education, Physical education subject.

✓ Yes, I make a list of my work, what time I study and when I do practicals for my physical education subject.

The phrase 'do practical of my physical education' is incorrect. It should be 'do practicals for my physical education subject' to correctly express the activity.

× It's very helpful for me to remember the things and I also note down all the points of subjects and read it.

✓ It's very helpful for me to remember things and I also note down all the points of subjects and read them.

The phrase 'read it' is incorrect because 'points' is plural, so the pronoun should be 'them' to agree in number.

× According to my viewpoint, most of the people think that when we made the list it takes a lot of time.

✓ According to my viewpoint, most people think that when we make the list it takes a lot of time.

The verb 'made' is past tense but the sentence is about a general truth or opinion, so present tense 'make' is appropriate.

× So some of the people have a lot of or some people have a good memory, so they do prefer to make the list when they go to the shopping and many other stores to buy something.

✓ So some people have a good memory, so they prefer not to make a list when they go shopping or to many other stores to buy something.

The phrase 'have a lot of or some people have a good memory' is unclear and incorrect. Also, 'do prefer' is unnecessary; 'prefer' suffices. 'Go to the shopping' should be 'go shopping'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.

× I like to write down all the items in my mobile phone because it's very easy and take less time.

✓ I like to write down all the items on my mobile phone because it's very easy and takes less time.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; 'on my mobile phone' is the correct phrase. Also, 'take' should be 'takes' to agree with singular subject 'it'.

× However, it's very difficult to write down the list on the paper.

✓ However, it's very difficult to write down the list on paper.

The phrase 'on the paper' is incorrect; 'on paper' is the correct expression when referring to writing lists.

× Sometime we also lost the paper where we write the things.

✓ Sometimes we also lose the paper where we write things.

The word 'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Lost' is past tense but the sentence implies habitual action, so 'lose' in present tense is correct. Also, 'the things' is better as 'things'.