List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear and natural, but it could be more concise and structured. Try to start with a direct response, then add a reason or future intention using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid redundancy such as 'honestly speaking' and 'just as it comes to my mind'.

Ejemplo: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things spontaneously. However, I plan to start making lists in the future so I don't forget anything important.

Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, then explain your reasoning with linking words. Avoid confusing phrases like 'never made a list mandatory to work'.

Ejemplo: No, I don't usually make lists for my work because my tasks are routine. However, I think making a list could help me stay organized if I tried it.

Sugerencia: You did not provide a relevant answer to the question. Always try to answer the question directly with a clear opinion or explanation, and support it with reasons or examples.

Ejemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they find it restrictive and prefer to be spontaneous in their activities.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it can be more concise and structured. Start with a direct answer, then explain your preference using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid repeating similar ideas.

Ejemplo: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is always with me, making it easy to check and update my list anytime.

× Honestly speaking, I never make a list before I shop, I just go to the supermarket and run through the aisles and buy whatever I need just as it comes to my mind.

✓ Honestly speaking, I never make a list before I shop; I just go to the supermarket, run through the aisles, and buy whatever I need just as it comes to my mind.

The original sentence is a run-on sentence with comma splices. It should be separated properly using semicolons or periods to improve clarity and grammatical correctness. Also, adding commas before conjunctions in a list improves readability.

× But I think I'll make a habit of preparing a list in future so that I don't miss anything.

✓ But I think I'll make a habit of preparing a list in the future so that I don't miss anything.

The phrase 'in future' is missing the definite article 'the'. The correct expression is 'in the future' when referring to time ahead.

× I don't think so. Making a list for my work would be necessary because this is the work I'll be doing every day for five days a week.

✓ I don't think so. Making a list for my work is necessary because this is the work I'll be doing every day for five days a week.

The modal verb 'would be' is incorrectly used here. Since the speaker is stating a general fact or necessity, the simple present 'is necessary' is appropriate.

× So I never made a list mandatory to work, but if I had a chance to do my list before going to work, I would like.

✓ So I never made making a list mandatory for work, but if I had a chance to make my list before going to work, I would like to.

The phrase 'made a list mandatory to work' is awkward and incorrect. It should be 'made making a list mandatory for work'. Also, 'do my list' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'make my list'. The sentence also lacks the infinitive 'to' after 'would like'.

× Hello, hello, hello.

✓ [No correction needed as this is not a relevant answer.]

The phrase 'Hello, hello, hello.' does not answer the question and is not a grammatical sentence related to the context. No grammatical correction applies here.

× I usually don't have a habit of making a list, but if I had to make a list, I would prefer my phone rather than paper because phone is always handy to me and I'll carry my phone wherever I go, so I think that's the reason I'll prefer phone over paper.

✓ I usually don't have a habit of making a list, but if I had to make one, I would prefer my phone rather than paper because the phone is always handy to me and I'll carry my phone wherever I go, so I think that's the reason I'll prefer the phone over paper.

The sentence is mostly correct but missing articles before 'phone'. 'Phone' is a countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific phone. Also, 'make a list' is better than repeating 'make a list' twice; 'make one' is more natural.