Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
Yes, I always make a list to make sure that everything I need to do is done after one shopping.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
Yes, I always make a list for my work, not only for my homework but also for my housework. As for me the least is the best thing to make sure that I do everything well.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
I think they may feel it is a trouble and it delays your plan, but As for me, I don't think so.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
In my opinion, make a list on paper make me feel full of my life and it gives me a chance to write my list down. Then I can remember it better.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Puntuación: 70.0Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,例如“after one shopping”不符合英语习惯,应改为“after shopping”。建议使用更自然的表达方式,并注意语法准确性。
Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a list to ensure that I buy everything I need during my shopping trips.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: 回答中有拼写错误('least'应为'list'),且表达不够清晰。建议注意拼写准确,句子结构更完整,表达更具体。
Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a list for my work, including both my homework and housework, because it helps me organize my tasks and complete them efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: 回答中语法和表达不自然,如“it is a trouble”应为“it is troublesome”,且句子结构不完整。建议使用更准确的词汇和完整的句子表达观点。
Ejemplo: I think some people find making lists troublesome and believe it might slow down their plans, but I personally disagree with that.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误,如主谓不一致('make'应为'making'或'makes'),表达不够自然。建议注意语法一致性,使用更自然的表达方式。
Ejemplo: In my opinion, making a list on paper makes me feel more connected to my life, and writing it down helps me remember things better.
× Yes, I always make a list to make sure that everything I need to do is done after one shopping.
✓ Yes, I always make a list to make sure that everything I need to do is done after shopping.
“shopping”是不可数名词,前面不需要加“one”。这里使用“one shopping”是不正确的,应该直接用“shopping”。
× As for me the least is the best thing to make sure that I do everything well.
✓ As for me, the list is the best thing to make sure that I do everything well.
“least”是“最少”的意思,和句意不符,应该是“list”(清单)。这里是拼写错误,导致意思不明确。
× I think they may feel it is a trouble and it delays your plan, but As for me, I don't think so.
✓ I think they may feel it is trouble and it delays your plan, but as for me, I don't think so.
“trouble”是不可数名词,前面不需要加不定冠词“a”。另外,“As”不应大写,应该是“as”。
× In my opinion, make a list on paper make me feel full of my life and it gives me a chance to write my list down.
✓ In my opinion, making a list on paper makes me feel full of my life and it gives me a chance to write my list down.
主语是动名词短语“making a list”,谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“makes”。原句中“make”用法错误,导致主谓不一致。