ListPart 1 Informe

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Conversación

Part 1

Examinador

Do you make a list when you shop?

Candidato

Uh, yes, I think it depends on different situation, uh, such as if my mom asked me to buy something to for her and I will make a list to help me, uh, to not forget anything important.

Examinador

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Candidato

Uh, yes, sometimes I will make least, uh, for example, when I preparing for the final term examination, uh, I will make a timesheet, uh, like a schedule to do everyday, uh, so I know what I need to do every day.

Examinador

Why don't some people like making lists?

Candidato

Well, I think they these people, they just want to do something free, freely, like to follow the.

Examinador

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Candidato

Personally, I would like to make this on my phone because the because the phone is always with me and I think it's very convenient. And anytime I can pick up my phone and look at the time, yeah, I think it's more convenient.

Evaluación

Total

Total: 6.0Fluidez y coherencia: 6.0Pronunciación: 6.0Gramática: 5.5Recurso léxico: 6.0

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Puntuación: 65.0

Sugerencia: 你的回答中有较多的语气词“uh”,影响了表达的流畅性。建议减少语气词的使用,回答时更自然简洁。同时,句子结构稍显混乱,可以尝试先给出明确的主题句,再补充具体细节。

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually make a shopping list when I need to buy something important, especially if my mom asks me to get something for her. This helps me remember everything and avoid forgetting anything.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Puntuación: 60.0

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和重复表达,如“make least”和“like a schedule to do everyday”。建议注意语法准确性,避免重复,并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ejemplo: Yes, sometimes I make a list for my work. For example, when I prepare for the final exam, I create a daily schedule so that I know exactly what tasks I need to complete each day.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Puntuación: 40.0

Sugerencia: 回答不完整且表达不清晰,缺少具体内容和连贯性。建议先给出明确观点,再用具体原因或例子支持,避免语法错误。

Ejemplo: I think some people dislike making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous and not feel restricted by a fixed plan.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Puntuación: 70.0

Sugerencia: 回答较为自然,但存在重复表达“because the because the”和“convenient”多次出现。建议用更多不同词汇表达同一意思,避免重复,使语言更丰富。

Ejemplo: Personally, I prefer making lists on my phone since it's always with me. This way, I can easily check my list anytime, which is very practical and efficient.

Gramática

Singular and plural issue

× I think it depends on different situation

I think it depends on different situations

这里的'situation'应该用复数形式'situations',因为前面用了'different'表示多种情况,名词应与之对应使用复数。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× if my mom asked me to buy something to for her

if my mom asked me to buy something for her

介词'to'在这里多余,应直接用'for'表示为某人买东西。

Singular and plural issue

× sometimes I will make least

sometimes I will make lists

'least'是拼写错误,正确应为'lists',表示复数的清单。

Present tense issue

× when I preparing for the final term examination

when I am preparing for the final term examination

动词'preparing'前缺少助动词'am',构成现在进行时态。

Incorrect use of adverbs

× like to follow the.

like to be free, freely, and follow their own way.

原句不完整且表达不清,'free'是形容词,'freely'是副词,表达自由地做事应使用副词,且句子应完整表达意思。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I would like to make this on my phone because the because the phone is always with me

I would like to make this on my phone because the phone is always with me

重复使用了'the because the',应删除多余部分,保持句子通顺。

Vocabulario

DifferentDissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
FinalLast; Irrevocable; Decider
FreeWithout charge; Unencumbered by; Vacant; Independent; On the loose
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
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