List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear but a bit repetitive and could be more concise. Try to avoid repeating the same idea and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, add a bit more detail to enrich your response.

Ejemplo: Yes, I sometimes make a shopping list because it helps me remember all the items I need, ensuring I don't forget anything important.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but contains some repetition and grammatical errors. Try to structure your answer clearly with a topic sentence and supporting details, and avoid repeating phrases unnecessarily.

Ejemplo: I am currently a student and do not have a job, so I don't make work-related lists. However, I do use lists for my studies to stay organized.

Sugerencia: Your answer has some repetition and lacks clarity. Use linking words to connect your ideas and try to be more specific in your explanation. Also, avoid repeating phrases and improve sentence structure.

Ejemplo: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they believe they can remember the items they need while shopping, so they find lists unnecessary.

Sugerencia: Your answer is quite long and contains some repetition and grammatical errors. Try to make your answer more concise and use linking words to improve coherence. Also, correct the tense and sentence structure for clarity.

Ejemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always have it with me when shopping. However, when I was a child, I used to make lists on paper.

× Actually I am a student and I don't work in any job or I don't and I don't have a job.

✓ Actually, I am a student and I don't work in any job and I don't have a job.

The phrase 'or I don't and I don't have a job' is redundant and confusing. Using 'and' instead of 'or' clarifies the sentence and maintains the present tense appropriately.

× So making list for a job is quite unknown for me because I don't work.

✓ So making a list for a job is quite unknown to me because I don't work.

The noun 'list' requires the definite article 'a' when mentioned for the first time. Also, the phrase 'unknown for me' should be 'unknown to me' to be grammatically correct.

× That's why they don't think making the list.

✓ That's why they don't think about making a list.

The phrase 'think making the list' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'think about making a list'. Also, 'a list' is appropriate here as it refers to lists in general, not a specific one.

× I always prefer to make a list on phone rather than paper because my phone is always on my hand and it goes wherever I went and if I if I go to shopping or doing groceries I have always my phone so I always prefer making a list on it.

✓ I always prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on paper because my phone is always in my hand and it goes wherever I go. If I go shopping or do groceries, I always have my phone, so I always prefer making a list on it.

The prepositions 'on phone' and 'on paper' need the possessive 'my' and the preposition 'on' before 'paper'. 'On my hand' should be 'in my hand'. 'Wherever I went' should be 'wherever I go' to maintain present tense. 'Go to shopping' should be 'go shopping'. 'Doing groceries' should be 'do groceries'. The sentence is corrected for proper preposition use and tense consistency.

× However, if I was a kid I will definitely make a list and paper.

✓ However, if I were a kid, I would definitely make a list on paper.

The conditional sentence requires the subjunctive mood 'were' instead of 'was' for hypothetical situations. Also, 'will' should be 'would' to match the conditional mood. 'Make a list and paper' is incorrect; it should be 'make a list on paper'.