List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to avoid filler words like 'Uh' and improve sentence clarity. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and correct grammar, e.g., 'I make a list' instead of 'I do a list'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me remember important items and stay within my budget. Moreover, I usually categorize the items into sections, which makes shopping more efficient.

Sugerencia: Complete your sentences fully and avoid abrupt endings. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples of how the list improves productivity.

Ejemplo: Definitely, I make a list of tasks on my phone's Notes app. This helps me stay focused and organized, and as a result, my productivity increases because I can track my progress easily.

Sugerencia: Avoid hesitation phrases like 'Well' and 'Let me think'. Make your answer more fluent and grammatically correct. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly.

Ejemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they think it takes too much time. Additionally, they prefer to rely on their memory, believing they can remember tasks without writing them down.

Sugerencia: Avoid redundancy such as 'finally, additionally' and incomplete sentences. Use linking words properly and complete your thoughts for clarity.

Ejemplo: I prefer making lists on my mobile phone because it is always with me, making it convenient. Moreover, I can easily edit, remove, or reorganize items, which is not possible with paper lists.

× Some are usually categorized items into sections.

✓ Some are usually categorizing items into sections.

The sentence requires the verb 'categorize' in the present participle form '-ing' to indicate the ongoing action. 'Categorized' is the past participle and does not fit here. Using 'categorizing' correctly shows the action of sorting items into sections.

× I make this list on a mobile phone called Notes.

✓ I make this list on my mobile phone using an app called Notes.

The phrase 'called Notes' is unclear and lacks a preposition to connect 'Notes' as an app. Adding 'using an app called Notes' clarifies that 'Notes' is an application on the phone.

× It also gives me a.

✓ It also gives me an advantage.

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly. Adding a noun like 'advantage' completes the sentence and conveys the intended meaning.

× some people perceive that list making is time consuming and they rely on their ability of to remember they can achieve.

✓ some people perceive that list making is time consuming and they rely on their ability to remember what they can achieve.

The phrase 'ability of to remember' is incorrect. The correct form is 'ability to remember'. Also, adding 'what' clarifies the object of 'remember'.

× Making it more convenient also gives me the advantage of editing, removing, reorganizing easily.

✓ Making it more convenient also gives me the advantage of editing, removing, and reorganizing easily.

When listing verbs in '-ing' form, it is correct to separate them with commas and use 'and' before the last item for clarity and proper grammar.

× Finally, additionally it can gives me an additional advantage of.

✓ Finally, additionally, it can give me an additional advantage.

The modal verb 'can' should be followed by the base form of the verb 'give', not 'gives'. Also, the sentence is incomplete and needs to end properly.