ListPart 1 Informe

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Part 1

Examinador

Do you make a list when you shop?

Candidato

Yes, I make a list if I will go to the supermarket because I think a list can Remember Me the things that I need to buy.

Examinador

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Candidato

Yes, I like to make a list when I am at work. Uh, the reason is the same, uh, because I think it can help me to remember the work that I haven't do. Yes, it works.

Examinador

Why don't some people like making lists?

Candidato

I think it's because they like a casual life. They don't like to control their life.

Examinador

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Candidato

I prefer to make a list on my phone or on my notebook because I think it's easier to make a modification.

Evaluación

Total

Total: 6.0Fluidez y coherencia: 6.0Pronunciación: 6.0Gramática: 5.5Recurso léxico: 6.0

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Puntuación: 65.0

Sugerencia: 你的回答表达了基本意思,但存在语法错误和用词不当,如“Remember Me”应为“remind me”。建议注意动词时态和大小写,避免语法错误,同时回答可以更简洁自然。

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually make a list when I go to the supermarket because it helps me remember the things I need to buy.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Puntuación: 60.0

Sugerencia: 回答中有语法错误,如“haven't do”应为“haven't done”,且有重复和口头语“uh”。建议减少口头语,注意动词形式,回答更流畅自然。

Ejemplo: Yes, I like to make lists at work because they help me remember tasks I haven't completed. It definitely works well for me.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Puntuación: 70.0

Sugerencia: 回答表达清晰,但可以用更丰富的词汇和连接词使表达更自然流畅。建议增加连接词和具体解释,使回答更完整。

Ejemplo: I think some people dislike making lists because they prefer a more casual lifestyle and don't want to feel controlled by schedules.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Puntuación: 75.0

Sugerencia: 回答基本清楚,但“make a modification”用词不够地道,建议使用“edit”或“change”。同时可以用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ejemplo: I prefer to make lists on my phone or in my notebook because it's easier to edit or change items when needed.

Gramática

Future tense issue

× Yes, I make a list if I will go to the supermarket because I think a list can Remember Me the things that I need to buy.

Yes, I make a list if I am going to the supermarket because I think a list can help me remember the things that I need to buy.

这里使用了“if I will go”,在表示将来计划时,英语中通常用现在进行时或一般现在时,而不是将来时。应改为“if I am going to”。另外,“Remember Me”应为“help me remember”,动词搭配错误。

Past tense issue

× because I think it can help me to remember the work that I haven't do.

because I think it can help me to remember the work that I haven't done.

“haven't do”中“do”应为过去分词“done”,因为现在完成时态后面需要用过去分词。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× I think it's because they like a casual life.

I think it's because they like a casual lifestyle.

“a casual life”表达不自然,通常用“a casual lifestyle”表示“随意的生活方式”,更符合英语习惯。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I prefer to make a list on my phone or on my notebook because I think it's easier to make a modification.

I prefer to make a list on my phone or in my notebook because I think it's easier to make modifications.

“on my notebook”应改为“in my notebook”,因为笔记本是容器,内容写在里面。并且“a modification”应为复数“modifications”,表示多次修改。

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