List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors, which affects naturalness and effectiveness. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence and avoid redundancy. Use simple and correct sentences to express your ideas.

Ejemplo: No, I usually don't make a list when I go shopping at the market because I prefer to buy things spontaneously.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and improve sentence structure for clarity.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like to make a list of tasks for work, prioritising what I should do first and last. This method works well because it helps me stay organised and in control.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat confusing and contains unclear phrases. Focus on expressing your opinion clearly with specific reasons and use linking words to structure your answer logically.

Ejemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they find them unnecessary. They can organise their tasks well without a list, while others prefer using lists to stay organised.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be improved by using more varied vocabulary and linking words to make it more natural and coherent.

Ejemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because it saves paper, which helps protect trees. Moreover, it's very convenient since I can check my list anywhere at any time.

× No, I don't need a nest or something for a shop at sourcing in the market.

✓ No, I don't need a list or anything for shopping at the market.

The word 'nest' is incorrect here; the intended word is likely 'list'. Also, 'something' is vague; 'anything' fits better in negative sentences. 'Shop at sourcing in the market' is awkward; 'shopping at the market' is the correct phrase.

× And I think, yeah, I could read that that she bought that.

✓ And I think, yes, I could see that she bought it.

The sentence is unclear and contains repeated words 'that that'. 'Could read' is incorrect in this context; 'could see' is more appropriate. The pronoun 'that' at the end is vague; 'it' is clearer.

× For the work, yes, I'd like to make a list that I what I should do 1st and what I should do in the last.

✓ For work, yes, I'd like to make a list of what I should do first and what I should do last.

The phrase 'a list that I what I should do' is incorrect; it should be 'a list of what I should do'. '1st' should be written as 'first' in formal speech. 'In the last' should be 'last' without 'in the'.

× It works very well, I can make my things organized, I don't make myself out of control.

✓ It works very well; I can keep my things organized, and I don't lose control.

The sentence is a run-on and needs proper punctuation. 'Make my things organized' is awkward; 'keep my things organized' is better. 'I don't make myself out of control' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'I don't lose control'.

× I think the medicine magistrates is unnecessary and does work to some people, yes, they maybe can organize their missions very well without a list, but for for others maybe a list helps a lot.

✓ I think making lists is unnecessary and doesn't work for some people; yes, they may be able to organize their tasks very well without a list, but for others, maybe a list helps a lot.

'Medicine magistrates' is incorrect; likely intended 'making lists'. 'Does work to some people' should be 'doesn't work for some people'. 'Maybe can' should be 'may be able to'. 'Missions' should be 'tasks' or 'things to do'. Repetition of 'for' is an error.

× So I I think it's very natural for some people to not like make lists.

✓ So I think it's very natural for some people not to like making lists.

The phrase 'to not like make lists' is incorrect; it should be 'not to like making lists'. The verb after 'like' should be in the '-ing' form.

× I prefer the year list on my phone.

✓ I prefer the yearly list on my phone.

'Year list' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'yearly' to describe something that happens every year.

× Then you don't need any paper.

✓ Then you don't need any paper.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× Then you don't need any trees to be cut down to make papers.

✓ Then you don't need any trees to be cut down to make paper.

'Papers' is incorrect here; 'paper' is an uncountable noun when referring to the material.

× And also it's very convenient.

✓ Also, it's very convenient.

Starting a sentence with 'And also' is redundant; 'Also' alone is sufficient.

× I can check my list everywhere just with my phone.

✓ I can check my list everywhere just with my phone.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.