Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
Yes, I often make a list when I shop. It is more convenient to spot the things you want and it will make shopping easier. And while you make a list, you can organize what you want to buy. That is a good strategy.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
I think it works and I often make a list when I work. It helps me organize what I want to do and make the project faster that I can get more time to do something else.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
There are different kind of people. Some people like to organize what they want to do and some people like to think of it when it's happening only because they have different characteristics.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
Even if a list on my phone is much more convenient, I like to make a list on paper 'cause it's a kind of atmosphere for me to buy something. Makes me feeling more about the thing.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Puntuación: 75.0Sugerencia: 回答较为自然且内容相关,但部分句子结构重复,且缺少连贯的连接词。建议使用更多连接词使表达更流畅,并避免重复表达。
Ejemplo: Yes, I often make a list when I shop because it helps me quickly find the items I need. Moreover, making a list allows me to organize my purchases efficiently, which makes the whole process easier.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Puntuación: 70.0Sugerencia: 回答内容较简单,语法和表达有些不够准确。建议使用更准确的句式和连接词,丰富细节,使表达更清晰。
Ejemplo: Yes, I often make a list for my work because it helps me prioritize tasks. As a result, I can complete projects more efficiently and have extra time for other activities.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不够清晰。建议注意语法准确性,使用更具体的词汇和句式,并用连接词使句子更连贯。
Ejemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous. They feel that planning too much limits their flexibility and creativity.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题。建议使用完整句子,注意语法,增加具体细节,并用连接词连接句子。
Ejemplo: Although making a list on my phone is more convenient, I prefer writing it on paper because it creates a special atmosphere. This way, I feel more connected to the shopping experience.
× There are different kind of people.
✓ There are different kinds of people.
这里的名词'kind'表示种类,前面有复数限定词'different',所以应使用复数形式'kinds',并且后面应加复数介词短语'of people'。
× Makes me feeling more about the thing.
✓ It makes me feel more connected to the thing.
句子缺少主语,且动词形式错误。应加主语'It',动词用第三人称单数形式'makes',后面接动词原形'feel',而不是动名词'feeling'。此外,表达更自然应使用'feel more connected to'。