Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
No I doesn't. I don't like make them visit when I shop because. I don't know what I want to buy things.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
Yes I do. I will make a list for my work because I think that can help work efficiency and sequence and more sequence.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
Maybe some people don't like making lists because they find it time consuming and boring. For example, they may feel that writing down tasks take too much effort. Also, some people prefer to be spontaneous and think that let's eliminate their freedom.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
I prefer to make a list on my phone because that is more convenient. Convenient. Yeah. Make a list on paper. When the paper goes lost, what can I do?
Do you make a list when you shop?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: 你的回答语法错误较多,表达不够自然,且句子结构混乱。建议练习正确使用助动词和动词形式,避免重复和不连贯的表达。
Ejemplo: No, I don't usually make a list when I go shopping because I often don't know exactly what I want to buy.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: 回答中表达不够清晰,句子结构重复且缺乏连贯性。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅,并具体说明清单如何帮助提高效率。
Ejemplo: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me organize tasks and improve my efficiency throughout the day.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: 回答内容较好,但表达有些不自然,部分句子语法错误。建议注意时态和句子结构,使用更自然的表达方式。
Ejemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming and boring. For example, writing down tasks can feel like too much effort. Also, some prefer to be spontaneous and feel that lists limit their freedom.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: 回答中有重复和不连贯的表达,语法和句子结构需要改进。建议用完整句子表达观点,并避免重复。
Ejemplo: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's more convenient. If I lose a paper list, I can't recover it easily.
× No I doesn't.
✓ No, I don't.
主语是第一人称单数'I',谓语动词应使用第一人称形式'do',而不是第三人称单数形式'does'。
× I don't like make them visit when I shop because.
✓ I don't like making them when I shop because.
动词'do'后面接动词时,应使用动名词形式'making',而不是动词原形'make'。
× I don't know what I want to buy things.
✓ I don't know what things I want to buy.
'buy'后面直接接宾语,'things'应紧跟在'what'后面,调整词序使句子更通顺。
× Does it work?
✓ Does it work?
此句无语法错误,符合语法规则。
× Yes I do. I will make a list for my work because I think that can help work efficiency and sequence and more sequence.
✓ Yes, I do. I will make a list for my work because I think that it can help work efficiency and sequence.
缺少代词'it'作为主语,句子不完整。多余的'repeat'词语应删除。
× Maybe some people don't like making lists because they find it time consuming and boring.
✓ Maybe some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming and boring.
'time consuming'应连写为复合形容词'time-consuming',修饰名词。
× For example, they may feel that writing down tasks take too much effort.
✓ For example, they may feel that writing down tasks takes too much effort.
主语'writing down tasks'为单数,谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式'takes'。
× Also, some people prefer to be spontaneous and think that let's eliminate their freedom.
✓ Also, some people prefer to be spontaneous and think that it eliminates their freedom.
'let's'是'let us'的缩写,不适合此处,应改为完整句子'it eliminates'。
× I prefer to make a list on my phone because that is more convenient.
✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is more convenient.
'that'指代不明确,改为'it'更合适。
× Convenient. Yeah. Make a list on paper.
✓ Making a list on paper is convenient, yeah.
原句为片段句,缺乏完整句子结构,应合并为完整句。
× When the paper goes lost, what can I do?
✓ When the paper gets lost, what can I do?
'go lost'用法不正确,正确表达为'get lost'。