List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 你的回答表达了观点，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如“make the leave”应为“make a list”。建议注意基本语法结构，避免重复表达，并使用更准确的词汇。

Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go. Firstly, it helps me shop more efficiently. Secondly, it prevents me from buying unnecessary items, which saves money.

Sugerencia: 回答内容较完整，但句子结构较为简单且有语法错误，如“emergent thing”应为“urgent tasks”。建议使用更准确的词汇和更连贯的句子结构。

Ejemplo: Definitely, I make a to-do list on WeChat. I prioritize urgent and important tasks at the top and include their deadlines. This helps me stay organized and focused while working.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在多处语法错误和表达不清，如“unconvenient”应为“inconvenient”，句子结构混乱。建议练习简单清晰的句子表达，并注意语法正确。

Ejemplo: I think some people dislike making lists because they find it inconvenient and time-consuming. They prefer to rely on their memory, but this can lead to forgetting important tasks.

Sugerencia: 回答表达了观点，但语法错误较多，如“prefer make”应为“prefer to make”，“might lost”应为“might lose”。建议注意动词形式和时态的正确使用。

Ejemplo: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always carry it with me. It's convenient and I can check my list anytime and anywhere without worrying about losing it.

× Yes, whenever I go shopping I will make the leave first.

✓ Yes, whenever I go shopping I will make the list first.

这里的 'make the leave' 是错误的搭配，应该是 'make the list'，因为购物时通常会列购物清单。'leave' 意为离开，不符合语境。

× Second of all, it saves lots of money because I just buy the thing making in the list, not buy something else which can save my money.

✓ Second of all, it saves a lot of money because I just buy the things on the list, not buy something else which can save my money.

'lots of money' 可以用 'a lot of money' 更自然；'the thing making in the list' 结构错误，应该是 'the things on the list'，表示购物清单上的物品。

× I will make a list on the WeChat and I will put the most important thing and emergent thing on the first one, and I will also write the due time on it because it is very important.

✓ I will make a list on WeChat and I will put the most important and urgent things at the top, and I will also write the due time on it because it is very important.

'on the WeChat' 应为 'on WeChat'，因为 WeChat 是平台名；'emergent thing' 应为 'urgent things'；'on the first one' 应改为 'at the top'，更符合表达习惯。

× The reason I think is because they think make a list is very unconvenient.

✓ The reason I think is because they think making a list is very inconvenient.

'make a list' 应改为动名词形式 'making a list'；'unconvenient' 拼写错误，正确为 'inconvenient'。

× It with their time, they're lazy, so they don't want to make the list just do whatever, just show up in their head.

✓ It wastes their time, they're lazy, so they don't want to make the list and just do whatever comes to their mind.

'It with their time' 结构错误，应为 'It wastes their time'；'just show up in their head' 应改为 'comes to their mind'，更符合英语表达习惯。

× I prefer make a list on my phone because I carry my phone whenever I walk, whenever I go, but on the paper I might lost them on the phone.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I carry my phone wherever I go, but with paper I might lose it; on the phone, it's very convenient.

'prefer make' 应为 'prefer to make'；'whenever I walk, whenever I go' 冗余，改为 'wherever I go'；'I might lost them on the phone' 语法错误，改为 'I might lose it'；句子结构不清晰，分开表达更好。

× It's very convenient. I wanted to check the list whenever I want it, wherever I am.

✓ It's very convenient. I want to check the list whenever I want, wherever I am.

时态错误，'wanted' 应为现在时 'want'，因为表达的是习惯性动作；'whenever I want it' 中 'it' 可省略。