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Part 1

Examinador

Do you make a list when you shop?

Candidato

No I won't. I normally will prepare something that I need and I just go directly.

Examinador

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Candidato

Yes, sure, I will schedule and our packet list so that I know what I should do and how can I do it.

Examinador

Why don't some people like making lists?

Candidato

Maybe they thought it will waste their time and they don't need some plans in advance.

Examinador

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Candidato

I want to make it on my phone so that I can go anywhere and I just open my phone and check what I wrote down.

Evaluación

Total

Total: 6.0Fluidez y coherencia: 6.0Pronunciación: 6.0Gramática: 5.5Recurso léxico: 6.0

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Puntuación: 60.0

Sugerencia: 你的回答不够自然,语法和表达存在错误,且内容较为简单。建议使用更自然的表达方式,并且补充一些细节,使回答更完整。

Ejemplo: No, I usually don't make a list when I go shopping. I just think about what I need beforehand and buy those items directly.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Puntuación: 55.0

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构,并且详细说明清单如何帮助你工作。

Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a to-do list for my work. It helps me organize my tasks and manage my time efficiently.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Puntuación: 65.0

Sugerencia: 回答表达较为简单,语法有误。建议使用更自然的表达,并且提供更多具体原因。

Ejemplo: Some people might dislike making lists because they feel it wastes time or they prefer to be spontaneous without planning ahead.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Puntuación: 70.0

Sugerencia: 回答较为自然,但句子结构可以更流畅,建议使用更地道的表达方式,并补充理由。

Ejemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient; I can access my list anytime and anywhere without carrying extra paper.

Gramática

Modal verb usage

× No I won't.

No, I don't.

这里的回答是对习惯性行为的否定,应该用一般现在时的否定形式'don't',而不是表示将来意愿的'wont'。

Modal verb usage

× I normally will prepare something that I need and I just go directly.

I normally prepare something that I need and just go directly.

描述习惯动作时,通常使用一般现在时,不需要用'will'表示将来。

Singular and plural issue

× Yes, sure, I will schedule and our packet list so that I know what I should do and how can I do it.

Yes, sure, I will schedule and our packet lists so that I know what I should do and how I can do it.

'packet list'应为复数形式'packet lists',因为这里指的是多个清单。

Sentence structure errors

× Yes, sure, I will schedule and our packet list so that I know what I should do and how can I do it.

Yes, sure, I will schedule and our packet lists so that I know what I should do and how I can do it.

'how can I do it'的语序错误,疑问句语序不适用于陈述句,应改为'how I can do it'。

Past tense issue

× Maybe they thought it will waste their time and they don't need some plans in advance.

Maybe they think it will waste their time and they don't need some plans in advance.

前半句时态不一致,'thought'是过去时,但后文用现在时态,且表达的是一般情况,应使用一般现在时'think'。

Incorrect use of quantifiers

× Maybe they thought it will waste their time and they don't need some plans in advance.

Maybe they think it will waste their time and they don't need any plans in advance.

'some plans'在否定句中应使用'any plans',表示否定的量词用法。

Modal verb usage

× I want to make it on my phone so that I can go anywhere and I just open my phone and check what I wrote down.

I want to make it on my phone so that I can go anywhere and just open my phone and check what I wrote down.

'I just open'中多余的主语'I'应省略,保持句子流畅。

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