List— Part 1 Informe
Conversación
Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
Yes, I do make a list when I shop, especially for groceries or have I don't forget whatever it is that I need to get from the shops.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
Yes, I do get to make a list of my work so that I do not forget the things that I need to do, the work that I need to complete, as well as being able to manage my time by simply following my work list. So it does work for me.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
I think that some people don't like making lists because they feel like it's futile for them to follow a list of things or work that they need to do. And in other instances, people are indecisive of the things that they want to do. Hence they do not get to see the importance of having a list of things to do.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
I prefer making a list on my phone because most of the time I have my phone with me. Actually, all the time I have my phone with me. So it's convenient for me to, umm, make a list of things on my phone rather on a paper. I know that surely I could forget a paper, but I wouldn't forget my phone at home.
Evaluación
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Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
Puntuación: 70.0Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases like 'or have I don't forget'. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting detail, using linking words for coherence.
Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a list when I shop, especially for groceries, so I don't forget anything important.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Puntuación: 75.0Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but a bit repetitive and wordy. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid repeating similar phrases. Also, keep sentences concise and natural.
Ejemplo: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me remember tasks and manage my time effectively, so it definitely works for me.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Puntuación: 80.0Sugerencia: Your answer is quite good but could be improved by using more natural linking words and avoiding formal or complex phrases like 'hence'. Try to use everyday language and connect your ideas smoothly.
Ejemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they think it's pointless to follow them, and others might be unsure about what they want to do, so they don't see why lists are important.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Puntuación: 70.0Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but includes hesitations and some redundancy. Try to avoid filler words like 'umm' and repeat ideas less. Use linking words to make your answer flow better and keep it concise.
Ejemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always have it with me, so it's more convenient than paper, which I might forget.
Gramática
× Yes, I do make a list when I shop, especially for groceries or have I don't forget whatever it is that I need to get from the shops.
✓ Yes, I do make a list when I shop, especially for groceries, so that I don't forget whatever it is that I need to get from the shops.
The original sentence has a confusing structure with 'or have I don't forget' which is incorrect and unclear. The correct conjunction here is 'so that' to express purpose. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.
× So it's convenient for me to, umm, make a list of things on my phone rather on a paper.
✓ So it's convenient for me to, umm, make a list of things on my phone rather than on paper.
The phrase 'rather on a paper' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'rather than on paper' to compare two options properly. Also, 'paper' is uncountable here, so no article 'a' is needed.
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