List— Part 1 Informe
Conversación
Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
No really, I'd prefer to shop spontaneously and see what catches my eye. I just have to remember what I need. But I don't want to be more specific because I think there are restrictions to me.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
I think listening for work is definitely necessary. I prefer weekly lists consisting of my major tasks and I have to finish the listing process at the start of the week and I believe this pattern enables me to finish off task on time and prevent any delays.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
I think there are multiple reasons, maybe some some of them think the listing process is too time consuming or somebody think thinks that the list itself restricts their places of finishing off tasks. But I think both kind of both people they have their better way of organizing their time.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
That was actually an easy question for me because I don't get easy access to electronical devices, so I would choose paperless. And I quite like this pattern because I think writing things down offers me more impression rather than just typing things on the phone.
Evaluación
Total
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: 回答不够自然流畅，表达有些重复且不够具体。建议简化表达，避免重复，并提供更具体的理由。
Ejemplo: No, I usually shop spontaneously because I enjoy discovering new things. I find that making a list limits my choices and reduces the fun of shopping.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Puntuación: 70.0Sugerencia: 回答中有语法和用词错误，表达不够清晰。建议使用更准确的词汇，简洁明了地说明做列表的好处。
Ejemplo: Yes, I make a weekly list of my main tasks at the start of each week. This helps me stay organized and complete my work on time without delays.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够连贯。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并用更清晰的语言表达观点。
Ejemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming or feel that lists limit their flexibility. However, everyone has their own way of managing time effectively.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: 回答中有用词错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议正确使用词汇，明确表达偏好，并说明原因。
Ejemplo: I prefer making lists on paper because I don't always have access to electronic devices. Writing things down helps me remember better than typing on my phone.
Gramática
× I think there are restrictions to me.
✓ I think there are restrictions on me.
介词“to”用在这里不正确，应该用“on”表示“对我有约束”。
× I prefer weekly lists consisting of my major tasks and I have to finish the listing process at the start of the week and I believe this pattern enables me to finish off task on time and prevent any delays.
✓ I prefer weekly lists consisting of my major tasks and I have to finish the listing process at the start of the week and I believe this pattern enables me to finish off tasks on time and prevent any delays.
“task”应为复数形式“tasks”，因为这里指多个任务。
× maybe some some of them think the listing process is too time consuming or somebody think thinks that the list itself restricts their places of finishing off tasks.
✓ maybe some of them think the listing process is too time consuming or somebody thinks that the list itself restricts their places of finishing off tasks.
“some some”重复，应去掉一个；“somebody think thinks”中“think”多余，应去掉；“somebody”是单数，动词用第三人称单数形式“thinks”。
× But I think both kind of both people they have their better way of organizing their time.
✓ But I think both kinds of people have their better way of organizing their time.
“both kind of both people they”结构混乱，应改为“both kinds of people”，且去掉多余的“they”。
× That was actually an easy question for me because I don't get easy access to electronical devices, so I would choose paperless.
✓ That was actually an easy question for me because I don't get easy access to electronic devices, so I would choose paperless.
“electronical”是错误的形容词形式，正确的是“electronic”。
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