List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear but a bit long and repetitive. Try to be more concise and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, instead of repeating 'they can', you can say 'so they avoid confusion and find items more easily.'

Ejemplo: I don't usually shop alone, but I have noticed that my parents always make a list. This helps them avoid confusion and find what they need more easily, which is very helpful.

Sugerencia: Good direct answer with supporting details. To improve, try to use linking words like 'however' or 'therefore' to make your answer more coherent. Also, avoid small grammar mistakes like 'points of the studies'—say 'important study points' instead.

Ejemplo: No, I don't have a job yet because I'm a teenager. However, I usually make lists for my studying, which helps me organize my time and remember important study points.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but contains filler words like 'uh' and 'you know' which reduce fluency. Try to avoid these and use clearer linking words such as 'because' and 'although'. Also, correct small grammar errors like 'that's really works' to 'that really works'.

Ejemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they believe they can organize everything in their mind more easily. Although this works for some, others find it less effective.

Sugerencia: Your answer has good ideas but is a bit unclear and contains filler words. Try to avoid 'uh' and improve word choice; for example, 'organizable' is not correct—use 'organized' or 'easier to organize'. Also, use linking words like 'however' and 'although' to connect ideas logically.

Ejemplo: I prefer making lists on paper because it's easier to organize and understand. However, sometimes I forget to bring the paper when shopping, which can be inconvenient. Despite this, I like paper lists because they feel more nostalgic.

× I don't usually go to shopping by myself, but when I see my parents do it, they always make a list of the things that they want to buy there so they can avoid getting confused and they can find the things that they want to buy easier and that's really helpful for them.

✓ I don't usually go shopping by myself, but when I see my parents do it, they always make a list of the things that they want to buy there so they can avoid getting confused and they can find the things that they want to buy easier and that's really helpful for them.

The phrase 'go to shopping' is incorrect because 'go' is followed by the gerund form without 'to' when referring to activities. The correct form is 'go shopping'. The preposition 'to' is not used before gerunds in this context.

× And for some people that's really works, but for others, I don't think so.

✓ And for some people, that really works, but for others, I don't think so.

The adverb 'really' should be placed before the verb 'works' without 'that's' contracted incorrectly. The phrase 'that's really works' is ungrammatical; it should be 'that really works'. Also, a comma after 'people' improves clarity.

× I actually prefer doing the older way that's, uh, making a list on the paper because it's more organizable and, uh, you can understand things so much better, but sometimes you forget to bring the papers to shopping and at that moment you focus everything you wanted to buy.

✓ I actually prefer doing the older way, that's, uh, making a list on paper because it's more organized and, uh, you can understand things so much better, but sometimes you forget to bring the papers when shopping and at that moment you forget everything you wanted to buy.

The word 'organizible' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'organized'. Also, 'on the paper' should be 'on paper' as a general expression. The phrase 'bring the papers to shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'bring the papers when shopping'. Additionally, 'you focus everything you wanted to buy' is unclear and should be 'you forget everything you wanted to buy' to convey the intended meaning.