Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
Actually, I seldom make a list when I'm shopping. I prefer to grab something I see and I interested in it, then I will buy it.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
Yes, I always make list for my work because it reminds me what things needed to do and I will completely finish them. Actually it's very work.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
Some people dislike making lists because they find it very restrictive and prefer a more random approach to organizing their tasks. Additionally, some may fill that list and unnecessary pressure or stress by constantly reminding them of unfinished work.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
To be honest, I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's very convenient to carry with me wherever I go. I can look up it immediately and it can better remind me of some unfair.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: 你的回答表达了观点,但语法和用词有误,且句子结构不够自然。建议注意动词时态和主谓一致,避免重复表达。
Ejemplo: Actually, I seldom make a list when I go shopping because I prefer to buy things that catch my eye at the moment.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题,建议使用正确的时态和表达方式,并且避免模糊的词汇。
Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me remember the tasks I need to complete, and I usually finish them all. It really works well for me.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Puntuación: 70.0Sugerencia: 回答内容较好,但有拼写错误和表达不够准确的问题。建议注意单词拼写和句子流畅性。
Ejemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they find them too restrictive and prefer a more flexible way to organize their tasks. Also, lists can sometimes cause unnecessary stress by reminding them of unfinished work.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当,建议注意介词使用和词汇选择,确保表达清晰。
Ejemplo: To be honest, I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's convenient to carry and I can check it anytime, which helps me remember important tasks better.
× Actually, I seldom make a list when I'm shopping. I prefer to grab something I see and I interested in it, then I will buy it.
✓ Actually, I seldom make a list when I'm shopping. I prefer to grab something I see and am interested in it, then I will buy it.
这里缺少动词be的正确形式,'I interested in it'应为'I am interested in it',因为动词'be'后接形容词表示状态。
× Yes, I always make list for my work because it reminds me what things needed to do and I will completely finish them.
✓ Yes, I always make lists for my work because it reminds me what things need to be done and I will completely finish them.
'make list'应为' make lists',因为这里指的是复数的清单。
× Yes, I always make list for my work because it reminds me what things needed to do and I will completely finish them.
✓ Yes, I always make lists for my work because it reminds me what things need to be done and I will completely finish them.
'needed to do'应改为'need to be done',因为这里是一般现在时的被动结构,表示需要完成的事情。
× Actually it's very work.
✓ Actually, it works very well.
'very work'用法错误,应使用动词'works'和副词'very well'来表达'它很有效'。
× Additionally, some may fill that list and unnecessary pressure or stress by constantly reminding them of unfinished work.
✓ Additionally, some may feel that list causes unnecessary pressure or stress by constantly reminding them of unfinished work.
'fill'应为'feel',且句子结构不完整,需补充动词'causes'来表达列表带来的压力。
× To be honest, I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's very convenient to carry with me wherever I go.
✓ To be honest, I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's very convenient to carry with me wherever I go.
此句无明显介词错误,保持原句。
× I can look up it immediately and it can better remind me of some unfair.
✓ I can look it up immediately and it can better remind me of some things.
'look up it'应为'look it up','some unfair'用词不当,应改为'some things'或具体内容。