List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear but a bit repetitive and could be more concise. Try to avoid redundancy and use linking words to make your response more natural and coherent. Also, use more varied vocabulary related to shopping.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because when I buy many items, I tend to forget small things. Therefore, having a list helps me stay organized and ensures I don't miss anything important.

Sugerencia: Your answer needs clearer structure and more precise language. Start with a direct response, then explain with specific details using linking words. Also, clarify your workplace and improve grammar for better clarity.

Ejemplo: Yes, I make a list for my work every morning at my job in New World Friction. This helps me organize my tasks for the day, and it works very well to keep me focused and efficient.

Sugerencia: Your answer is too vague and repetitive. Try to provide a more natural and detailed explanation with linking words. Avoid unnecessary filler words and improve sentence structure.

Ejemplo: Some people prefer not to make lists because they have a good memory and can remember their tasks easily. As a result, they find lists unnecessary.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas and choose clearer vocabulary. Also, avoid starting with 'No' when the answer is affirmative.

Ejemplo: I prefer to make lists on my mobile phone because most phones have a notes app, which makes it easy to create and carry lists compared to paper.

× Yes, I often make a list when I go for shopping because sometimes when I buy many things from shops then I forget some little things.

✓ Yes, I often make a list when I go shopping because sometimes when I buy many things from shops, I forget some small things.

The phrase 'go for shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping' without 'for'. Also, 'some little things' is better expressed as 'some small things' for clarity and naturalness.

× Yes I make a list for my work like I am working in the new world friction. So there I have made list at morning what I have to do in all day.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work because I am working in New World Friction. So there, I make a list in the morning of what I have to do all day.

The phrase 'I have made list at morning' is awkward and incorrect. The present perfect 'have made' is not suitable here; simple present 'make' fits better for habitual action. Also, 'at morning' should be 'in the morning'. The phrase 'what I have to do in all day' should be 'what I have to do all day'.

× So it also works very good.

✓ So it also works very well.

'Good' is an adjective and should not be used to modify the verb 'works'. The correct adverb form is 'well' to describe how something works.

× Like some people are, some people are very intelligent, so they do not forget anything.

✓ Some people are very intelligent, so they do not forget anything.

The phrase 'Like some people are' is unnecessary and causes sentence structure issues. Removing it makes the sentence clearer and grammatically correct.

× Yes I make a list for my work like I am working in the new world friction.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work because I am working in New World Friction.

'the new world friction' seems to be a proper noun (a company name), so it should be capitalized and not preceded by 'the' unless it is part of the official name. Also, 'like' is incorrectly used; 'because' fits better to explain the reason.

× No, I give more preference to make a list on mobile phone because nowadays every phone give a notes app, people can make a seat because it is carrying easily as compared to papers.

✓ No, I prefer to make a list on my mobile phone because nowadays every phone has a notes app. People can make a list because it is easier to carry compared to papers.

The phrase 'give more preference to make' is incorrect; 'prefer to make' is correct. 'Every phone give' should be 'every phone has' for subject-verb agreement. 'Make a seat' is incorrect; it should be 'make a list'. 'It is carrying easily' is awkward; 'it is easier to carry' is correct. Also, 'papers' should be 'paper' or 'pieces of paper'.