Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
Yes, of course. When I go shopping, I usually make a list so I can. I can't forget anything important and you can mention me. I need to buy. What? Yeah.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
Yes of course, I usually make a list for my study because it can help me doing the things 1 by 1 and never forget things I didn't doing.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
Because in my view, I think maybe their memories are very good. They can mentions anything themselves, yeah.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
Actually, I prefer to make at least on the on my because it's convenient and it's easy to take out my list. Like if you write on the paper, maybe you'll forget to get to.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: 回答不够连贯,句子结构混乱,表达不清晰。建议练习用完整句子直接回答问题,并用连接词组织句子,使表达更自然流畅。
Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need to buy and prevents me from forgetting important items.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: 语法错误较多,表达不够准确。建议使用正确的时态和表达方式,并用连接词使句子更连贯。
Ejemplo: Yes, I usually make a list for my studies because it helps me complete tasks one by one and ensures I don't forget anything.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Puntuación: 45.0Sugerencia: 表达不够自然,词汇使用不当。建议用更准确的词汇和句型表达观点,并避免重复。
Ejemplo: I think some people don't like making lists because they have good memories and can remember things without writing them down.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: 回答不完整且表达混乱。建议明确表达偏好,使用完整句子,并解释原因。
Ejemplo: Actually, I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and easy to access, whereas paper lists can be easily lost or forgotten.
× I usually make a list for my study because it can help me doing the things 1 by 1 and never forget things I didn't doing.
✓ I usually make a list for my study because it can help me do the things one by one and never forget things I didn't do.
动词help后面应接动词原形do,而不是doing。didn't后面也应接动词原形do,不能用doing。
× I can't forget anything important and you can mention me.
✓ I can't forget anything important and you can remind me.
这里的'mention me'用法错误,应使用'remind me'表示提醒我。
× They can mentions anything themselves, yeah.
✓ They can mention anything themselves, yeah.
情态动词can后应接动词原形mention,不能用第三人称单数形式mentions。
× Actually, I prefer to make at least on the on my because it's convenient and it's easy to take out my list.
✓ Actually, I prefer to make at least one on my phone because it's convenient and it's easy to take out my list.
句中缺少名词one和phone,且介词on后应接名词短语,原句结构混乱,需补充完整。
× Like if you write on the paper, maybe you'll forget to get to.
✓ Like if you write on paper, maybe you'll forget to bring it.
write后面搭配介词on paper,不用加定冠词the;forget to get to表达不准确,应改为forget to bring it表示忘记带。