List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear but can be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating the same idea and try to use linking words to connect your points smoothly. Also, use more precise vocabulary like 'shopping list' instead of 'a list'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I tend to forget items. By doing so, I ensure I buy everything I need without missing anything.

Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. Also, avoid redundancy and focus on clarity.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a to-do list for my work. This helps me stay organized and complete tasks efficiently without forgetting anything important.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by using better sentence structure and linking words. Also, avoid repeating phrases and try to give a more detailed explanation.

Ejemplo: In my opinion, some people avoid making lists because they believe it wastes time. Additionally, those with a good memory may find lists unnecessary since they can remember tasks easily.

Sugerencia: Your answer is good but can be more concise and natural. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid repeating the same point. Also, correct minor grammatical errors.

Ejemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's quicker and more convenient. Unlike paper lists, I don't have to worry about losing them since my phone is always with me.

× I make a list whenever I have to go to shopping because I easily forget the things which I want to buy.

✓ I make a list whenever I have to go shopping because I easily forget the things which I want to buy.

The phrase 'go to shopping' is incorrect because 'shopping' is a gerund and does not require the preposition 'to' after 'go'. The correct form is 'go shopping'. This is a common error involving verb + -ing form usage.

× So by making a list I am sure that what I have to buy and I can easily buy it.

✓ So by making a list, I am sure of what I have to buy and I can easily buy it.

The original sentence lacks clarity and proper structure. Adding a comma after 'list' improves readability. Also, 'sure that what I have to buy' is incorrect; it should be 'sure of what I have to buy' to correctly express certainty about the items.

× Yes, definitely I always make a list for my work which I have done because my making a list of work what I have to.

✓ Yes, definitely I always make a list of my work which I have to do because by making a list of the work I have to do,

The phrase 'make a list for my work which I have done' is incorrect because the list is for work to be done, not already done. Also, 'my making a list of work what I have to' is ungrammatical. The correct preposition is 'of' for 'make a list of'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct preposition use.

× I can easily do my work efficiently and effectively so that with and do and complete my work on time and I do not miss anything which is important.

✓ I can easily do my work efficiently and effectively so that I can complete my work on time and not miss anything important.

The original sentence is confusing and contains redundant and incorrect phrases like 'so that with and do and complete'. The corrected sentence simplifies and clarifies the meaning, ensuring proper sentence structure and coherence.

× From my viewpoint, some people think that making list is a waste of time as those I think those people do not make lists who have a good memory and they can easily remember the things.

✓ From my viewpoint, some people think that making lists is a waste of time because I think those people who have a good memory do not make lists and can easily remember things.

The original sentence misuses conjunctions and has awkward phrasing. 'As those I think those people' is incorrect. Replacing 'as' with 'because' and restructuring the sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× some people think that making list is a waste of time

✓ some people think that making lists is a waste of time

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general act of making multiple lists, not a single list. This is a singular and plural agreement issue.

× I always prefer to make a list on phone because I think that it is less time consuming and more convenient and I can easily found it in my phone.

✓ I always prefer to make a list on my phone because I think that it is less time-consuming and more convenient and I can easily find it on my phone.

The phrase 'on phone' should be 'on my phone' to specify possession. Also, 'found' is past tense; the correct present tense verb is 'find'. Additionally, 'time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective. The preposition 'in' should be 'on' when referring to something stored on a device.

× On the other hand, if I made a list on paper then I have to search where I have put the paper, so it's very difficult task.

✓ On the other hand, if I make a list on paper then I have to search where I have put the paper, so it's a very difficult task.

The conditional sentence refers to a general truth, so the present tense 'make' should be used instead of past tense 'made'. Also, 'very difficult task' needs the article 'a' before it.