Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
I don't make shopping list because I always think I only need a few things at first but actually end up buying much more. That's why shopping lists don't work for me.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
Well, I do not make shopping lists. I do make lists for my work due to the heavy workload. Sometimes it does work because it could remind me of important tasks, but there are times when my workload is so overwhelming that I don't even get a chance to make a list.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
Lot of people here don't like making this. I think this depends on the individual. Not everyone needs to plan anything out.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
I'm not sure. Sometimes I make a list on paper, other times on my phone depending on where I am or what I'm doing. When I am studying, I definitely prefer using paper over my smartphone.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Puntuación: 70.0Sugerencia: 你的回答表达了观点,但句子结构较为简单,且缺少连接词使表达更流畅。建议使用连接词如"because"或"so"来增强逻辑性,同时丰富词汇表达。
Ejemplo: I usually don't make a shopping list because I tend to think I only need a few items, but I often end up buying much more, so lists don't really work for me.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Puntuación: 80.0Sugerencia: 回答内容较完整,但部分句子略显重复。建议使用更多连接词如"however"或"although"来使句子更连贯,同时避免重复表达。
Ejemplo: I don't make shopping lists, but I do make lists for my work because of the heavy workload. Although sometimes they help me remember important tasks, there are times when I'm so overwhelmed that I don't even have time to make a list.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: 回答较简短且表达不够准确。建议使用更准确的词汇,如"lists"而非"this",并提供具体原因或例子来丰富内容。
Ejemplo: Many people don't like making lists because they find it restrictive or unnecessary. It really depends on personal preference, as not everyone feels the need to plan everything in detail.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Puntuación: 75.0Sugerencia: 回答表达了观点,但缺少更丰富的细节和连接词。建议增加原因说明,并使用连接词如"because"或"so"使表达更连贯。
Ejemplo: I sometimes make lists on paper and other times on my phone, depending on my location and activity. For example, when I'm studying, I definitely prefer paper because it's easier to focus without digital distractions.
× I don't make shopping list because I always think I only need a few things at first but actually end up buying much more.
✓ I don't make shopping lists because I always think I only need a few things at first but actually end up buying much more.
shopping list 是可数名词,表示购物清单,复数形式应为 shopping lists。这里缺少复数形式,导致单复数不一致。建议购物清单用复数形式。
× Lot of people here don't like making this.
✓ A lot of people here don't like making this.
lot of 前面需要加冠词 a,表示“许多”,缺少 a 会导致表达不完整。建议在 lot 前加 a。