List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and a bit confusing, especially the phrase 'forget the basement.' Try to be more direct and clear in your response. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ejemplo: Usually, I don't make a list when I shop because I find it easier to remember what I need. However, sometimes I forget important items, which can be frustrating. Therefore, I try to rely on my memory rather than a list.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but could be clearer and more structured. Avoid vague phrases like 'keep all the boxes.' Instead, explain your process more specifically. Use linking words to improve coherence.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually make a list for my work or school tasks. It helps me track my progress and stay organized. When I have a lot of homework, making a list ensures I don't forget any assignments.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains irrelevant phrases like 'Ask me a question' and 'it's not that Taylor, my son.' Focus on answering the question directly with clear and specific reasons. Use proper grammar and linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ejemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they feel overwhelmed by the number of tasks. Also, seeing a long list can make them frustrated if they can't complete everything. Therefore, they prefer not to make lists to avoid stress.

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear but could be more concise and structured. Avoid filler words like 'yeah' and unclear phrases like 'Will I find.' Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient. Sometimes, I forget the paper list at home, but my phone is always with me. This way, I can easily check my list anytime I need.

× If I do it I tend to forget the basement, so when I get to the supermarket or the store I feel frustrated.

✓ If I do it, I tend to forget the basement, so when I get to the supermarket or the store, I feel frustrated.

The original sentence is missing commas after introductory clauses and before conjunctions, which affects clarity and flow. Adding commas after 'If I do it' and before 'so' improves readability and follows standard punctuation rules.

× Well, for my work or school in this case is different because I need to keep all the boxes to feel that I am in progress and that I am making efforts to finish.

✓ Well, for my work or school in this case, it is different because I need to keep all the boxes to feel that I am making progress and that I am making efforts to finish.

The sentence is missing a comma after 'in this case' to separate the introductory phrase. Also, 'feel that I am in progress' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'making progress' to express advancement or improvement.

× Ask me a question. I could hear it's not that Taylor, my son, but they feel frustrated or like, yeah, frustrated for don't accomplish everything that they have.

✓ Ask me a question. I could hear it's not that, Taylor, my son, but they feel frustrated or, like, yeah, frustrated for not accomplishing everything that they have.

The phrase 'for don't accomplish' is grammatically incorrect. It should be 'for not accomplishing' to correctly use the gerund form after a preposition. Also, commas are added for clarity around 'Taylor, my son' and 'like, yeah'.

× If you saw a long list, sometimes you get overwhelmed.

✓ If you see a long list, sometimes you get overwhelmed.

The sentence uses past tense 'saw' in a conditional that implies a general truth or habitual action, which requires present tense 'see' to be grammatically correct.

× Will I find my phone being more convenient?

✓ I find my phone more convenient.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'Will I find' which is a question form, but the context suggests a statement. Removing 'Will' and rephrasing to 'I find' makes it a correct declarative sentence. Also, 'being' is unnecessary here.

× Sometimes I just forget the paper when I wrote my list.

✓ Sometimes I just forget the paper when I write my list.

The sentence incorrectly mixes present tense 'forget' with past tense 'wrote'. Both actions should be in the present tense to maintain consistency, so 'wrote' should be 'write'.