List— Part 1 Informe
Conversación
Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store because it help me remember everything I need to buy. This way I can save time and avoid buying unnecessary items. For example, last week at least help me quickly find all the ingredients for recipe I want to try.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
Yes, I usually make this for work because it's help me to remember what I what I do in today, because if I have not, at least I can't remember what I do what I can do today that.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
I think, I think they, uh, have a good memories and they know to, they know what they need to do in the day and.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's comfortable to use and sometimes I don't have a paper in my hand so I can use the phone for at least the tags.
Evaluación
Total
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: คำตอบของคุณควรปรับปรุงเรื่องไวยากรณ์และความชัดเจน เช่น การใช้คำกริยาให้ถูกต้องและการเชื่อมประโยคให้ลื่นไหลมากขึ้น นอกจากนี้ควรหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำซ้ำและเพิ่มรายละเอียดที่ชัดเจนขึ้นเกี่ยวกับประโยชน์ของการทำรายการซื้อของ
Ejemplo: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before going to the store because it helps me remember everything I need. This way, I can save time and avoid buying unnecessary items. For instance, last week the list helped me quickly find all the ingredients for a new recipe I wanted to try.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: คำตอบนี้มีปัญหาเรื่องไวยากรณ์และความชัดเจนมาก ควรฝึกใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์และลำดับความคิดให้ชัดเจน รวมถึงใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อให้คำตอบมีความต่อเนื่องและเข้าใจง่าย
Ejemplo: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me remember the tasks I need to complete each day. Without a list, I often forget what I have to do, so it really improves my productivity.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: คำตอบนี้ควรปรับปรุงเรื่องความชัดเจนและความสมบูรณ์ของประโยค รวมถึงลดการใช้คำเติมและเสียงรบกวน ควรให้เหตุผลที่ชัดเจนและใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อเชื่อมโยงความคิด
Ejemplo: I think some people don't like making lists because they have good memories and can remember their daily tasks easily. Therefore, they feel that making a list is unnecessary.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: คำตอบนี้ควรปรับปรุงเรื่องความชัดเจนและการใช้คำให้เหมาะสม รวมถึงการเชื่อมประโยคให้ลื่นไหลและมีเหตุผลสนับสนุนที่ชัดเจนมากขึ้น
Ejemplo: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and I always have it with me. Sometimes, I don't have paper handy, so using my phone ensures I can keep track of my tasks anytime.
Gramática
× Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store because it help me remember everything I need to buy.
✓ Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store because it helps me remember everything I need to buy.
The subject 'it' is third person singular, so the verb should be 'helps' instead of 'help' to agree in number.
× For example, last week at least help me quickly find all the ingredients for recipe I want to try.
✓ For example, last week it helped me quickly find all the ingredients for the recipe I wanted to try.
The sentence is missing the subject 'it' and the verb tense should be past tense 'helped' to match 'last week'. Also, 'recipe' needs the definite article 'the' and 'want' should be past tense 'wanted' to maintain consistency.
× Yes, I usually make this for work because it's help me to remember what I what I do in today, because if I have not, at least I can't remember what I do what I can do today that.
✓ Yes, I usually make this for work because it helps me to remember what I do today, because if I don't, I can't remember what I have done or can do today.
The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with 'it'. The phrase 'what I what I do in today' is incorrect and should be 'what I do today'. The phrase 'if I have not' is unclear and should be 'if I don't'. The sentence structure is confusing and has been clarified for meaning.
× I think, I think they, uh, have a good memories and they know to, they know what they need to do in the day and.
✓ I think they have good memories and they know what they need to do during the day.
The phrase 'have a good memories' is incorrect; 'memories' is plural and should not have 'a'. The preposition 'in the day' is better expressed as 'during the day'. The sentence was also simplified for clarity.
× I think, I think they, uh, have a good memories and they know to, they know what they need to do in the day and.
✓ I think they have good memories and they know what they need to do during the day.
The article 'a' before the plural noun 'memories' is incorrect. 'Memories' is plural and should be used without 'a' or with a quantifier like 'some'.
× I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's comfortable to use and sometimes I don't have a paper in my hand so I can use the phone for at least the tags.
✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's comfortable to use and sometimes I don't have paper in my hand, so I can use the phone for at least the tags.
The article 'a' before 'paper' is unnecessary because 'paper' is an uncountable noun here. Also, a comma is added before 'so' to separate the clauses properly.
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