Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
Azule make a list and write all the things which I need to buy when I go to the shop. You know, I often go to the shop at the weekend. It is quite important for me to buy my things.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
Yes, I often make a list before I finish work. It is quite efficient. If I walk under the list which I've written, it helps me a lot.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
You know, for one reason people think making a list with with their time. And someone think they can do it by order?
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
I prefer to make a list on my phone. You know, it is very convenient for me to use my mobile phone. I take it everywhere. Sometimes I forgot to take a picture with me, so it is quite difficult for me to use paper if I haven't prepared well.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,例如“Azule make a list”应为“I usually make a list”。建议注意主谓一致和时态的正确使用,同时避免重复表达。
Ejemplo: I usually make a list and write down all the things I need to buy when I go shopping. I often shop on weekends, so having a list helps me remember everything I need.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: 回答中表达不清晰,存在语法错误,如“walk under the list”应为“work through the list”。建议使用更准确的表达,并增加连接词使句子更连贯。
Ejemplo: Yes, I often make a list before finishing work because it helps me stay organized. By working through the list, I can complete my tasks more efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: 回答不完整且语法错误较多,表达不清晰。建议明确表达观点,使用完整句子,并提供具体原因。
Ejemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they think it wastes their time. Others believe they can remember tasks without writing them down.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: 回答较为自然,但存在语法错误,如“forgot”应为“forget”。建议注意时态一致,并简化表达使其更流畅。
Ejemplo: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's very convenient and I always carry it with me. Sometimes I forget to bring a paper list, so using my phone is easier.
× Azule make a list and write all the things which I need to buy when I go to the shop.
✓ Azule makes a list and writes all the things which I need to buy when I go to the shop.
主语是第三人称单数(Azule),谓语动词应加-s,表示单数第三人称的现在时态。
× Azule make a list and write all the things which I need to buy when I go to the shop.
✓ Azule makes a list and writes all the things which I need to buy when I go to the shop.
主语是第三人称单数,谓语动词应加-s,保持主谓一致。
× You know, I often go to the shop at the weekend.
✓ You know, I often go to the shops at the weekend.
shop在此处表示复数,指多个商店,通常用复数形式。
× If I walk under the list which I've written, it helps me a lot.
✓ If I walk through the list which I've written, it helps me a lot.
短语应为“walk through the list”,表示逐项查看,使用“walk under”不合适。
× If I walk under the list which I've written, it helps me a lot.
✓ If I go through the list which I've written, it helps me a lot.
应使用“go through”表示仔细查看,使用“walk under”是不正确的介词搭配。
× You know, for one reason people think making a list with with their time.
✓ You know, for one reason people think making a list wastes their time.
“think making a list with with their time”表达不正确,应使用“wastes their time”表示浪费时间。
× And someone think they can do it by order?
✓ And some people think they can do it by memory.
“someone”应改为“some people”表示一些人;“by order”表达不清,应改为“by memory”表示凭记忆完成。
× Sometimes I forgot to take a picture with me, so it is quite difficult for me to use paper if I haven't prepared well.
✓ Sometimes I forget to take a picture with me, so it is quite difficult for me to use paper if I haven't prepared well.
句子描述的是习惯性动作,应使用一般现在时“forget”,而非过去时“forgot”。