List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to avoid repetition and redundancy by expressing your ideas more clearly and concisely. Use a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details, and keep your answer within 4-5 sentences. For example, instead of repeating 'I need a list,' say 'I make a list to remind myself of the items I need to buy.'

Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need. This way, I avoid forgetting important items and save time while shopping.

Sugerencia: Reduce the use of filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence structure for clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence and support it with reasons. For example, explain why you are organized and how that helps you manage work without a list.

Ejemplo: No, I don't make lists for my work because I am very organized. I can remember my tasks easily and manage them efficiently without writing them down.

Sugerencia: Use more precise vocabulary and avoid vague phrases like 'somehow.' Provide clearer reasons and examples to support your answer. Also, use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Ejemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they find it unusual and believe it wastes time. Instead, they prefer to remember their tasks mentally and manage their work without writing things down.

Sugerencia: Avoid repetition and filler words. Use clear and concise sentences with appropriate linking words. Explain your preference with specific reasons and examples.

Ejemplo: I prefer making lists on paper because writing helps me remember tasks better. Also, paper lists are easier to access anytime without relying on a phone.

× So I really need a list when I'm going to shopping.

✓ So I really need a list when I'm going shopping.

The verb 'go' is followed by the gerund form without the preposition 'to'. The correct form is 'go shopping', not 'go to shopping'. This is a common collocation in English.

× So that's why I am, uh, I don't need a list for my works.

✓ So that's why I am, uh, I don't need a list for my work.

The noun 'work' is uncountable when referring to tasks or job duties, so it should not be pluralized as 'works' in this context.

× So that's why they don't make list and they can manage their works, their tasks in their mind.

✓ So that's why they don't make lists and they can manage their work, their tasks in their mind.

The noun 'list' should be pluralized as 'lists' because it refers to multiple instances in general. Also, 'works' should be 'work' as it is uncountable in this context.

× And when I go to, when I go at work, I'm very organized person.

✓ And when I go to work, I'm a very organized person.

The correct preposition is 'to' when referring to going to a place like 'work'. Also, the article 'a' is needed before 'very organized person'.

× I prefer to make a list on my, on a paper because, uh, when you're writing something, you will manage that in your mind and you will, you will, uh, do it better in a better way.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because, uh, when you're writing something, you will manage that in your mind and you will, you will, uh, do it better in a better way.

The word 'paper' here is uncountable and does not require the indefinite article 'a'. Saying 'on paper' is the correct expression.

× So that's why making a list on paper is very better than making a list on your phone and you are free to do it.

✓ So that's why making a list on paper is much better than making a list on your phone and you are free to do it.

The phrase 'very better' is incorrect. The correct comparative adverb is 'much better' or simply 'better' without 'very'.