List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ, đồng thời nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn. Hãy chú ý chia động từ đúng và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

Ejemplo: I usually make a shopping list because it helps me save money. It allows me to know exactly what to buy and avoid unnecessary purchases, which also saves time.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'stay all the night' và 'retire my task'. Hãy dùng các cụm từ phù hợp để câu trả lời tự nhiên và rõ ràng hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and complete my tasks efficiently. For example, by writing down everything I need to do, I can save time and avoid forgetting important deadlines, which helps me finish work on time and reduce stress.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'making leads' thay vì 'making lists'. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Ejemplo: From my perspective, some people don't like making lists because they feel it makes them act like robots. They think following a list strictly limits their freedom.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và câu không hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

Ejemplo: I make lists both on paper and on my phone, depending on what is more convenient at the time. However, I prefer using my phone because I always carry it with me, so I can easily check my list anytime.

× I usually make lists when I shop because it help me to save the money.

✓ I usually make lists when I shop because it helps me to save money.

The subject 'it' requires the verb 'helps' in the third person singular form to agree in number. Also, 'the money' is incorrect here; 'money' is an uncountable noun and does not need 'the'.

× I avoiding avoid avoid buying unnecessary things so I can save the money, save time when shopping.

✓ I avoid buying unnecessary things so I can save money and save time when shopping.

The verb 'avoid' should be in its base form followed by the gerund 'buying'. The repeated words 'avoiding avoid avoid' are incorrect. Also, 'the money' should be 'money' as it is uncountable.

× Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me to stay all the night and retire my task effectively.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me to stay up all night and complete my tasks effectively.

The phrase 'stay all the night' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'stay up all night'. 'Retire my task' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'complete' or 'finish' tasks. Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the context.

× If they make a list, they need to do exactly what's at least so it makes they feel like they they are the machine.

✓ If they make a list, they need to do exactly what's on it, so it makes them feel like they are machines.

The phrase 'what's at least' is incorrect; it should be 'what's on it'. The pronoun 'they' is incorrectly used instead of 'them' after 'makes'. Also, 'the machine' should be plural 'machines' to agree with 'they'.

× I make a list on bought on paper and my phone based on which is convenient for me at that time.

✓ I make a list on paper or on my phone based on which is convenient for me at that time.

The phrase 'on bought on paper' is incorrect and redundant. The correct preposition is 'on' for both 'paper' and 'phone'. Also, 'or' is better than 'and' to indicate choice.

× But I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always bring my phone on my by my party so I can see I can see.

✓ But I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always bring my phone with me, so I can see it.

The phrase 'bring my phone on my by my party' is incorrect and unclear. The correct expression is 'bring my phone with me'. Also, 'I can see I can see' is repetitive; it should be 'so I can see it'.