Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
Actually not. I just remember what I need to buy by memory because every time I just I just have little to buy, but because I'm now just stay at home and I just have little to buy.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
Yeah, I really like to make a list for my works because I really need to order my all the work. I need to put the work which is most important in the first line and I think it it work and it worked well.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
I think that depends on their own habits. Some people may don't like making legs because they can remember all the thing they need to do by memory. And for me, I think write down what I need to do will push me to quickly down all the thing.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
Nowaday I just make a list on my phone because it's really convenient, you know, writing on paper is actually it just actually our, our, our line.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: 回答不够连贯且有重复,句子结构混乱,建议简化表达,避免重复,并且增加连接词使回答更自然流畅。
Ejemplo: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I only buy a few items each time. Since I mostly stay at home now, I can easily remember what I need.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: 表达有些重复且语法错误,建议使用更准确的时态和词汇,避免重复,并用连接词使句子更流畅。
Ejemplo: Yes, I like to make lists for my work because it helps me prioritize tasks. I usually put the most important tasks at the top, and this method works well for me.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: 回答中有语法错误和词汇错误(如"making legs"),建议注意词汇准确性,句子结构应更清晰,避免语法错误。
Ejemplo: I think it depends on personal habits. Some people don't like making lists because they can remember everything they need to do. However, for me, writing things down helps me complete tasks more quickly.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: 回答不完整且含糊,有语法和表达错误,建议简洁明了地表达观点,避免重复和无意义的词语。
Ejemplo: Nowadays, I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's very convenient. Writing on paper feels outdated and less practical for me.
× I just have little to buy
✓ I just have a little to buy
这里的little需要用作可数名词时,前面应加冠词a,表示“有一点儿”。否则表达不完整。
× I'm now just stay at home
✓ I'm just staying at home now
现在进行时态中,动词stay应使用现在分词形式staying,且副词now通常放句尾。
× I really like to make a list for my works
✓ I really like to make a list for my work
work作为不可数名词时不加复数-s,表示工作内容。
× I really need to order my all the work
✓ I really need to order all my work
形容词all应放在所有格my之前,顺序错误导致表达不自然。
× I need to put the work which is most important in the first line
✓ I need to put the work that is most important in the first line
关系代词which用于限定性从句时,that更常用且更自然。
× I think it it work and it worked well
✓ I think it works and it worked well
表达现在的看法时,动词work应使用第三人称单数形式works。
× Some people may don't like making legs
✓ Some people may not like making lists
may后应接动词原形,且legs应为lists,语义错误。
× they can remember all the thing they need to do by memory
✓ they can remember all the things they need to do by memory
thing应使用复数形式things,表示多项内容。
× write down what I need to do will push me to quickly down all the thing
✓ write down what I need to do will push me to quickly get down all the things
thing应为复数things;短语“quickly down”不完整,需加动词get。
× Nowaday I just make a list on my phone
✓ Nowadays I just make a list on my phone
Nowadays为副词,表示“现在”,拼写错误。
× writing on paper is actually it just actually our, our, our line
✓ writing on paper is actually just our own line
句子结构混乱,重复词语无意义,改为“our own line”更通顺。