List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more structured and clear. Start with a direct response, then add supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. For example, say: "I usually don't make a shopping list. Instead, I memorise what I need to buy, especially when my parents ask me to get something for dinner. Once I buy the items, I leave the shop immediately."

Ejemplo: I usually don't make a shopping list. Instead, I memorise what I need to buy, especially when my parents ask me to get something for dinner. Once I buy the items, I leave the shop immediately.

Sugerencia: Your answer should be more organised and avoid filler words like 'umm' and 'blah blah'. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give specific examples using linking words. For example: "Yes, I make lists for my work. I use my laptop to note down tasks for each day, such as Monday and Tuesday. Also, when I receive assignments, I write down their deadlines to manage my time effectively."

Ejemplo: Yes, I make lists for my work. I use my laptop to note down tasks for each day, such as Monday and Tuesday. Also, when I receive assignments, I write down their deadlines to manage my time effectively.

Sugerencia: Focus on clarity and grammar. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then explain with reasons and examples using linking words. Avoid vague phrases. For example: "I think it depends on personal habits. For instance, I don't usually make lists because I don't mind forgetting small tasks. However, some people prefer to be well-prepared and organised, so they make lists."

Ejemplo: I think it depends on personal habits. For instance, I don't usually make lists because I don't mind forgetting small tasks. However, some people prefer to be well-prepared and organised, so they make lists.

Sugerencia: Try to organise your answer with clear sentences and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example: "I prefer making lists on my phone because paper lists can be easily lost. Since I carry my phone every day, I won't lose the list. Also, it's very convenient to check the list anywhere."

Ejemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because paper lists can be easily lost. Since I carry my phone every day, I won't lose the list. Also, it's very convenient to check the list anywhere.

× I will I will, I will memorize like what I buy and I as soon as I buy the as soon as I bought it, I'm just leave it.

✓ I will, I will memorize what I buy and as soon as I buy it, I just leave it.

The sentence incorrectly repeats 'I will' and uses 'as soon as I bought it' which mixes past participle with present tense context. The phrase 'as soon as I buy it' is correct because the action is immediate and ongoing. Also, 'I'm just leave it' is incorrect; it should be 'I just leave it' to match the tense and subject-verb agreement.

× I don't really making this because I don't really like sort of sort of care about this one what

✓ I don't really make this because I don't really care about this one.

The phrase 'don't really making' is incorrect because 'don't' requires the base form of the verb, so it should be 'don't really make'. Also, 'like sort of sort of care about this one what' is redundant and unclear; simplifying to 'don't really care about this one' improves clarity and correctness.

× I think make a list on my phone is a better choice umm because like for paper I can easily lose it.

✓ I think making a list on my phone is a better choice because I can easily lose paper.

The phrase 'like for paper I can easily lose it' is awkward and unclear. It is better to say 'I can easily lose paper' to express the idea clearly. Also, 'make a list' should be 'making a list' to function as the subject of the sentence.

× However if you make it on phone like because you are carrying your phone like everyday so you won't gon you won't lose it.

✓ However, if you make it on your phone, because you carry your phone every day, you won't lose it.

The sentence uses 'you' inconsistently and has a typo 'gon'. It should consistently use 'you' and correct 'gon' to 'go to' or omit it. Also, 'on phone' should be 'on your phone' to specify possession. The phrase 'like' is unnecessary and should be removed for clarity.

× And you also it's pretty confident convenience for making a list on your phone.

✓ And it's also pretty convenient to make a list on your phone.

The phrase 'pretty confident convenience' is incorrect; 'confident' is an adjective describing a person, not a noun. The correct adjective here is 'convenient'. Also, the sentence structure is awkward; rephrasing to 'it's pretty convenient to make a list' improves clarity and correctness.