List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more concise and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and keep your response within 5 sentences. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why you make a list, and conclude with a benefit.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually make a shopping list on my phone because it helps me remember everything I need. This way, I avoid forgetting items and having to return to the store, which saves me time. Therefore, making a list is a valuable habit for efficient shopping.

Sugerencia: Focus on clarity and grammar. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to connect your ideas logically. Avoid repeating words and try to complete your sentences fully to improve coherence.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually make a list when I have tasks to do because it helps me stay organized. As a result, I can complete more work within the time I have. This method saves me time by preventing me from wandering about what to do next.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear but could be improved by adding more specific reasons and linking words to expand your explanation. Try to give examples or consequences to enrich your response.

Ejemplo: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they believe it takes too much time. Moreover, they prefer to be spontaneous and go with the flow, which allows them to feel more relaxed and flexible in their daily activities.

Sugerencia: Avoid repeating words and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to connect your ideas smoothly. Keep your answer concise and focused.

Ejemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient and faster than writing on paper. Also, using my phone saves effort since I always have it with me. So, making lists digitally suits my lifestyle better.

× because that make me more organized

✓ because that makes me more organized

The subject 'that' is singular, so the verb should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject. This is a subject-verb agreement error.

× and it it it takes my less effort and time to write it on phone rather than on paper

✓ and it takes me less effort and time to write it on the phone rather than on paper

The verb 'takes' should agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'my less effort' is incorrect; it should be 'me less effort' because 'me' is the object of the verb 'takes'. Additionally, 'on phone' should be 'on the phone' to use the correct article with the noun 'phone'.

× I usually make a list when I shop on my notes on my phone

✓ I usually make a list on my notes on my phone when I shop

The preposition 'on' is misplaced. The phrase 'on my notes on my phone' should come before 'when I shop' to clarify that the list is made on the phone notes during shopping.