Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
Yes, I do. I usually use shopping lists, especially whenever I go to the grocery store, Uh, because I'm a very forgetful person, you know, uh, once I, once I imagine the items to buy, but then I forget it.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
Yeah, I always use A to do list, especially in the web system which is used in our team and as a shared, it will work well, but sometimes I forget to put put my work itself. Yeah.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
I guess simply it is sort of taking time to prepare, you know some lazy people or those of who has been, those who have strong memories they don't like do it.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
Definitely I would like to use a mobile phone apps and because it is easily easily to be fixed and also another thing is like you know, I will never forget to bring my phone rather than paper.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Puntuación: 70.0Sugerencia: 回答は自然ですが、繰り返しや曖昧な表現("uh", "you know")が多く、より簡潔で明確な表現を心がけると良いです。また、具体的な例や理由をもう少し詳しく述べると効果的です。
Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list, especially when I go to the grocery store, because I tend to forget items if I don't write them down.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: 回答は質問に答えていますが、文法や語順の誤りがあり、繰り返しも見られます。より正確な文法を使い、具体的な効果や問題点を明確に述べると良いでしょう。
Ejemplo: Yes, I always use a shared to-do list on our team's web system, which helps us coordinate tasks effectively, although sometimes I forget to add my own tasks.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が多いです。理由を明確にし、文を簡潔にまとめる練習をしましょう。
Ejemplo: I think some people dislike making lists because it takes time, and others with good memories feel they don't need them.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Puntuación: 70.0Sugerencia: 回答は内容が伝わりますが、繰り返しや不自然な表現があり、文法も改善の余地があります。理由を明確にし、流暢に話す練習をしましょう。
Ejemplo: I definitely prefer using mobile phone apps because they are easy to edit, and I always have my phone with me, unlike paper lists.
× I usually use shopping lists, especially whenever I go to the grocery store, Uh, because I'm a very forgetful person, you know, uh, once I, once I imagine the items to buy, but then I forget it.
✓ I usually use a shopping list, especially whenever I go to the grocery store, because I'm a very forgetful person. Once I imagine the items to buy, but then I forget them.
The phrase 'shopping lists' should be singular 'a shopping list' because the speaker refers to the list they use each time, not multiple lists. Also, 'forget it' is incorrect because 'items' is plural, so it should be 'forget them'. This is a singular and plural agreement issue.
× Yeah, I always use A to do list, especially in the web system which is used in our team and as a shared, it will work well, but sometimes I forget to put put my work itself. Yeah.
✓ Yeah, I always use a to-do list, especially in the web system which is used in our team and shared; it works well, but sometimes I forget to put my work itself.
The phrase 'A to do list' should be 'a to-do list' with correct article and hyphenation. Also, 'as a shared' is unclear and should be 'shared'. The verb 'will work' should be 'works' to match present tense. This involves singular/plural and article usage.
× I guess simply it is sort of taking time to prepare, you know some lazy people or those of who has been, those who have strong memories they don't like do it.
✓ I guess simply it takes some time to prepare. You know, some lazy people or those who have strong memories don't like to do it.
The phrase 'those of who has been' is incorrect; it should be 'those who have'. Also, 'don't like do it' should be 'don't like to do it'. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and verb form.
× Definitely I would like to use a mobile phone apps and because it is easily easily to be fixed and also another thing is like you know, I will never forget to bring my phone rather than paper.
✓ Definitely, I would like to use a mobile phone app because it is easy to fix, and also, I will never forget to bring my phone rather than paper.
The phrase 'a mobile phone apps' is incorrect because 'apps' is plural but preceded by 'a'. It should be 'a mobile phone app'. 'Easily easily to be fixed' is incorrect; it should be 'easy to fix'. This is an incorrect use of adjectives and adverbs.