List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có nội dung rõ ràng, tuy nhiên bạn nên tránh sử dụng các từ ngữ thừa như "Al uh" và "Umm" để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, bạn có thể sử dụng thêm các từ nối để làm cho câu trả lời trôi chảy và logic hơn.

Ejemplo: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to shop spontaneously and see what catches my eyes. Moreover, I have a very good memory and usually remember what I need for the week or for grocery shopping. Therefore, I feel that making a list is quite restrictive for me.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời chính xác hơn, ví dụ như "prefer more flexible abroad" không rõ nghĩa. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "the list become irrelevant" nên là "the list becomes irrelevant".

Ejemplo: I don't usually make a list for my work because I prefer to keep track of my tasks mentally. From my perspective, making a list can be restrictive since unexpected tasks often come up, which makes the list less relevant.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: I believe some people don't like making lists because they are not used to it or lack experience. They might not see the benefits of making lists or haven't found a method that works well for them.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng tốt nhưng có phần không liên quan ở đầu câu và sử dụng từ không chính xác như "parallel university". Bạn nên tập trung trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và tránh các cụm từ không cần thiết để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn.

Ejemplo: I prefer to make lists on paper because I enjoy the tactile feeling of writing things down and crossing items off my list. Furthermore, it's less distracting than using my phone, which often has many notifications.

× I prefer to shop spontaneously and see what catches my eyes.

✓ I prefer to shop spontaneously and see what catches my eye.

The phrase 'catches my eyes' is incorrect because 'eye' should be singular here. The expression 'catch my eye' is an idiomatic phrase meaning to attract attention. Using 'eyes' in plural is not standard in this context.

× I also have very good memory and usually remember what I need for the week or for the grocery shop.

✓ I also have a very good memory and usually remember what I need for the week or for grocery shopping.

The noun 'memory' is countable in this context and requires the article 'a'. Also, 'grocery shop' should be 'grocery shopping' to correctly express the activity.

× I prefer to keep track of my task mentally.

✓ I prefer to keep track of my tasks mentally.

The word 'task' should be plural 'tasks' because it refers to multiple items to keep track of, not just one.

× I prefer more flexible abroad.

✓ I prefer to be more flexible abroad.

The original sentence lacks the verb 'to be' and the preposition 'to' before 'more flexible'. The corrected sentence includes 'to be' to form the correct structure and clarifies the meaning.

× Because of that, I sometime I see an expected task come up and the list become irrelevant.

✓ Because of that, sometimes I see an unexpected task come up and the list becomes irrelevant.

The word 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Expected' should be 'unexpected' to make logical sense. 'List' is singular, so the verb should be 'becomes' to agree in number.

× I believe that the people who don't make lists that because they they don't have the habit or the experience in making lists, they might not be used to making lists and don't see the benefit at all, and they might not have found at least making method that's worse for them.

✓ I believe that the people who don't make lists do so because they don't have the habit or experience of making lists; they might not be used to making lists and don't see the benefit at all, and they might not have found at least one method of making lists that works for them.

The original sentence has redundant words ('that because they they') and unclear phrasing. 'Do so because' is the correct conjunction phrase. Also, 'found at least making method that's worse for them' is unclear and corrected to 'found at least one method of making lists that works for them' for clarity and correctness.

× I think I prefer to start making lists with paper because I enjoy the tactile feeling of writing things down and crossing thing off my list.

✓ I think I prefer to start making lists on paper because I enjoy the tactile feeling of writing things down and crossing things off my list.

The phrase 'with paper' should be 'on paper' to correctly express the medium. 'Crossing thing off' should be 'crossing things off' because multiple items are crossed off.

× Furthermore, it's less distracting than using my phone with all these notification and you know.

✓ Furthermore, it's less distracting than using my phone with all these notifications, you know.

The word 'notification' should be plural 'notifications' to agree with 'all these'. Also, adding a comma before 'you know' improves sentence flow.