List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，导致意思难以理解。建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并用清晰的语言表达购物时列清单的习惯。

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the supermarket. It helps me remember what I need to buy and plan my shopping efficiently.

Sugerencia: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然。建议用简单明了的句子表达对工作清单的态度，并说明原因。

Ejemplo: No, I usually don't make a list for my work because it makes me feel anxious if I can't finish everything. Sometimes I try, but it doesn't help much.

Sugerencia: 句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。建议用更简单的句子说明人们不喜欢列清单的原因，并注意语法正确。

Ejemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they feel stressed by them. Also, they may prefer to be more flexible with their plans.

Sugerencia: 回答不完整且语法错误严重，难以理解。建议明确表达偏好，并说明原因，使用完整句子。

Ejemplo: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it helps me set reminders and keep track of deadlines easily.

× Yes, I often go to the supermarket to buy something what I make.

✓ Yes, I often go to the supermarket to buy something that I make.

这里使用了错误的关系代词“what”，应使用“that”来引导定语从句，指代前面的“something”。

× At least it made me make clear to what I bike and so I can make a plan to shop.

✓ At least it made me make clear what I buy and so I can make a plan to shop.

句中“to what I bike”中的“to”使用错误，且“bike”应为“buy”，应去掉“to”并改正动词拼写。

× At least it made me make clear to what I bike and so I can make a plan to shop.

✓ At least it makes me clear about what I buy so I can make a plan to shop.

句子时态不一致，前半句用过去时“made”，后半句用现在时“can”，应统一时态，且表达更自然。

× No, actually I don't like to make a list for my work because it made me anxious about my work if I don't finish my work.

✓ No, actually I don't like to make a list for my work because it makes me anxious about my work if I don't finish my work.

句中“made”使用了过去时，但句意表达的是一般情况，应使用现在时“makes”。

× But sometimes I will make a list but it doesn't work.

✓ But sometimes I make a list, but it doesn't work.

这里“will”表示将来时，不符合语境，表达习惯用一般现在时“make”。

× The reason of people don't like making this is they don't want to under the huge stresses and they won't make more sensitive plan in their work.

✓ The reason people don't like making this is that they don't want to be under huge stress and they won't make more detailed plans in their work.

“reason of people”错误，应为“reason people”；“under the huge stresses”缺少动词，应为“be under huge stress”；“more sensitive plan”表达不当，应为“more detailed plans”；连接词“is they”应为“is that they”。

× I usually make a list on my about what I do in the future and mark the time of deadline and it reminds me to.

✓ I usually make a list on my phone about what I will do in the future and mark the deadline time, and it reminds me.

“make a list on my about”缺少名词，应为“on my phone”；“what I do in the future”时态不当，应为“what I will do”；“mark the time of deadline”表达不自然，应为“mark the deadline time”；“reminds me to”缺少宾语，应去掉“to”。

× Submission my.

✓ I submit my work on time.

“Submission my.”不是完整句子，缺少谓语和宾语，需补充完整表达。