Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
I think this is so important for me, especially if you wanna go to the shopping. It's helped me to remember what I wanna buy.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
Yes, I do it sometimes. I think it's work if someone commended.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
I think because it's take time and people are not patients, so I want everything so quickly. So yes.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
I really love put my list on my phone because my phone is with me all the time but the paper I think I will lost it.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: حاول استخدام جمل أكثر رسمية وطبيعية، وابتعد عن استخدام العبارات العامية مثل "wanna". كما يجب أن تبدأ بجملة واضحة مباشرة تجيب على السؤال، ثم تضيف تفاصيل داعمة بشكل منظم.
Ejemplo: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember all the items I need to buy. For example, last week I prepared a list before going to the supermarket, which saved me time and prevented me from forgetting anything.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: حاول أن تكون إجابتك أكثر وضوحًا ومنطقية، واستخدم عبارات صحيحة نحويًا. ابدأ بجملة واضحة تجيب على السؤال، ثم اشرح كيف تساعدك القائمة في عملك مع أمثلة.
Ejemplo: Yes, I sometimes make lists for my work. They help me organize my tasks better and ensure I don't forget important duties, especially when I have a busy schedule.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Puntuación: 35.0Sugerencia: حاول تحسين القواعد النحوية واستخدام كلمات مناسبة. ابدأ بجملة واضحة تشرح السبب، ثم أضف تفاصيل داعمة باستخدام روابط منطقية.
Ejemplo: Some people dislike making lists because it takes time and they are impatient. They prefer to do things quickly without planning, which can sometimes lead to forgetting important tasks.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: حاول استخدام جمل أكثر دقة وقواعد صحيحة. ابدأ بجملة واضحة تعبر عن تفضيلك، ثم اشرح السبب مع تفاصيل داعمة.
Ejemplo: I prefer to make my lists on my phone because I always carry it with me. Using my phone helps me avoid losing the list, unlike paper lists which can be easily misplaced.
× It's helped me to remember what I wanna buy.
✓ It helps me to remember what I want to buy.
The original sentence incorrectly uses 'It's helped' which is present perfect tense, but the context requires simple present tense 'It helps' to indicate a general truth. Also, 'wanna' is informal and should be 'want to' in formal speech.
× I think it's work if someone commended.
✓ I think it works if someone recommends.
The phrase 'it's work' is incorrect; it should be 'it works' to indicate effectiveness. Also, 'commended' is the past tense of 'commend' meaning to praise, but the intended meaning is 'recommend', so 'recommends' is correct here.
× I think because it's take time and people are not patients, so I want everything so quickly.
✓ I think it's because it takes time and people are not patient, so they want everything quickly.
'It's take' is incorrect; it should be 'it takes' for subject-verb agreement. 'Patients' is a noun meaning people receiving medical care; the correct adjective is 'patient'. Also, 'I want' should be 'they want' to match the subject 'people'. 'So quickly' is better as 'quickly'.
× I really love put my list on my phone because my phone is with me all the time but the paper I think I will lost it.
✓ I really love putting my list on my phone because my phone is with me all the time, but I think I will lose the paper.
After 'love', the verb should be in the '-ing' form: 'putting'. 'I will lost' is incorrect; 'lost' is past tense, the correct future tense is 'will lose'. Also, 'the paper' is better than just 'paper' here.