List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your sentences clearer and avoid repeating the same idea. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, you can say: "Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember what to buy and ensures I don't forget important daily items."

Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember what to buy and ensures I don't forget important daily items.

Sugerencia: Your answer shows good content but has grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions. Try to use simpler and clearer sentences, and avoid filler words like "Uh." Also, use linking words to improve coherence. For example: "Yes, I usually write down my tasks the night before. Then, in the morning, I review the list to remind myself of what I need to do, so I don't forget anything."

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually write down my tasks the night before. Then, in the morning, I review the list to remind myself of what I need to do, so I don't forget anything.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your points. For example: "It depends on the person. Some people believe making lists wastes time because they have a good memory. Also, if tasks are small, they may not find lists necessary."

Ejemplo: It depends on the person. Some people believe making lists wastes time because they have a good memory. Also, if tasks are small, they may not find lists necessary.

Sugerencia: Your answer contains good ideas but is quite long and has grammatical mistakes. Try to make your sentences shorter and clearer, and use linking words to organize your ideas. For example: "I prefer both paper and phone lists. If I don't have paper, I use my phone. However, at home, I write important notes on paper because it is less likely to be lost compared to phone notes."

Ejemplo: I prefer both paper and phone lists. If I don't have paper, I use my phone. However, at home, I write important notes on paper because it is less likely to be lost compared to phone notes.

× I do not forget to taking the important things for my daily use.

✓ I do not forget to take the important things for my daily use.

The verb 'forget' is followed by the infinitive form 'to take', not the gerund 'taking'. Using 'to taking' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'forget to + base verb'.

× I make a list before going to a shopping because it makes me easier what I have to take and what I have to take.

✓ I make a list before going shopping because it makes it easier for me to know what I have to take.

The phrase 'going to a shopping' is incorrect; 'shopping' is an uncountable noun here and does not need an article or 'to'. Also, 'makes me easier' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'makes it easier for me'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.

× I just write down the points what I have to do in the next day.

✓ I just write down the points that I have to do the next day.

The phrase 'in the next day' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'the next day' without 'in'. Also, 'what' should be 'that' to introduce a relative clause here.

× And when I wake up early in the morning and go to work, I just read the points and it first get reminder in my world what I have to do next.

✓ And when I wake up early in the morning and go to work, I just read the points and it first reminds me what I have to do next.

The phrase 'get reminder in my world' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'reminds me'. Also, 'first get reminder' is ungrammatical; 'first reminds me' is correct.

× And I didn't forget what I have to do Uh.

✓ And I don't forget what I have to do.

The sentence is about a habitual action, so present tense 'don't forget' is appropriate instead of past tense 'didn't forget'. Mixing past and present tenses here is incorrect.

× Well, it depend upon the different people to people.

✓ Well, it depends upon different people.

The verb 'depend' must agree with the singular subject 'it', so it should be 'depends'. Also, 'people to people' is redundant and incorrect; 'different people' suffices.

× Some people think that it is just a wastage of time.

✓ Some people think that it is just a waste of time.

The word 'wastage' is less common and more formal; 'waste' is the correct and natural noun here. This is a vocabulary choice rather than a strict grammar error but improves correctness.

× They most of the time some people doing the small task so they didn't make any list.

✓ Most of the time, some people do small tasks, so they don't make any list.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'They most of the time some people' is redundant and confusing; 'doing' should be 'do' to match present tense; 'the small task' should be plural 'small tasks'; 'didn't make' should be 'don't make' to indicate habitual action.

× when I was on my home and important notes which I have to take for a long period of the time that I was writing on a paper because paper never get been lost because sometime when we are just using our phone.

✓ When I am at home, I write important notes that I have to keep for a long time on paper because paper never gets lost, unlike sometimes when we are just using our phone.

The sentence incorrectly uses past tense 'was' and 'was writing' for habitual actions, which should be present tense. 'On my home' is incorrect preposition; 'at home' is correct. 'Get been lost' is ungrammatical; 'gets lost' is correct. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.