Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
Yes, I make a list when I shopping because I want to buy everything in shop. So I make a list to see to ranking what I want to buy, what I want to buy, what is it necessary to buy and it's helped me not over budget.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
Yes, I made a list for my work every day because I have many types of complaints, including both daily routines and unexpected assignment. Making really happy prioritize this task so I can stay organized and work more efficiently.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
Some people like make English don't like make English because it's make them feel tiring and stress when looking so many times need to do and they feel overwhelmed for example.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
I prefer make a list on my phone because it's very convenient. It's happy to list down all the task lists and track the progress easier and avoid the forgetting of missing the task.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng thì đúng (make thay vì making), tránh lặp từ và sắp xếp ý hợp lý hơn. Hãy dùng các liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và logic hơn.
Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me prioritize what I need to buy and avoid overspending. This way, I can focus on necessary items and manage my budget effectively.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu, tránh lỗi sai như 'made' thay vì 'make', và câu 'Making really happy prioritize' không rõ nghĩa. Hãy dùng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
Ejemplo: Yes, I make a list every day for my work because I have many tasks, including daily routines and unexpected assignments. Making a list helps me prioritize tasks so I can stay organized and work more efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, dùng câu đơn giản, tránh lặp từ và giải thích rõ lý do tại sao một số người không thích làm danh sách.
Ejemplo: Some people don't like making lists because it can make them feel tired and stressed when they see many tasks to do. They might feel overwhelmed by the number of things on the list.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ 'prefer make' nên là 'prefer to make', và câu 'It's happy to list down' không đúng. Hãy dùng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và giải thích lý do cụ thể hơn.
Ejemplo: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is very convenient. It allows me to easily write down tasks, track my progress, and avoid forgetting any important tasks.
× Yes, I make a list when I shopping because I want to buy everything in shop.
✓ Yes, I make a list when I am shopping because I want to buy everything in the shop.
The verb 'shopping' needs to be in the present participle form with the auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense. Also, 'in shop' should be 'in the shop' to use the correct article.
× Yes, I make a list when I shopping because I want to buy everything in shop.
✓ Yes, I make a list when I am shopping because I want to buy everything in the shop.
The noun 'shop' requires the definite article 'the' to specify a particular place.
× So I make a list to see to ranking what I want to buy, what I want to buy, what is it necessary to buy and it's helped me not over budget.
✓ So I make a list to rank what I want to buy, what is necessary to buy, and it helps me not to go over budget.
The original sentence has redundant phrases and incorrect structure. 'To see to ranking' is incorrect; it should be 'to rank'. Also, 'it's helped me' should be 'it helps me' to maintain present tense and correct verb form. 'Not over budget' should be 'not to go over budget' for clarity.
× Yes, I made a list for my work every day because I have many types of complaints, including both daily routines and unexpected assignment.
✓ Yes, I make a list for my work every day because I have many types of complaints, including both daily routines and unexpected assignments.
The verb 'made' is past tense but the sentence refers to a habitual action, so present tense 'make' is appropriate. Also, 'assignment' should be plural 'assignments' to agree with 'many types'.
× Making really happy prioritize this task so I can stay organized and work more efficiently.
✓ I really prioritize this task so I can stay organized and work more efficiently.
The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Making really happy prioritize' is incorrect. The corrected sentence uses 'I really prioritize' to express the intended meaning clearly.
× Some people like make English don't like make English because it's make them feel tiring and stress when looking so many times need to do and they feel overwhelmed for example.
✓ Some people don't like making lists because it makes them feel tired and stressed when they see so many things they need to do, and they feel overwhelmed, for example.
The original sentence has incorrect pronoun and verb forms. 'Like make English' is incorrect; it should be 'like making lists'. 'It's make' should be 'it makes'. 'Feel tiring and stress' should be 'feel tired and stressed'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.
× I prefer make a list on my phone because it's very convenient.
✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's very convenient.
The verb 'prefer' should be followed by the infinitive form 'to make'.
× It's happy to list down all the task lists and track the progress easier and avoid the forgetting of missing the task.
✓ It's helpful to list down all the tasks and track the progress more easily to avoid forgetting or missing tasks.
'It's happy' is incorrect; it should be 'It's helpful'. 'Task lists' is redundant; 'tasks' suffices. 'Track the progress easier' should be 'track the progress more easily'. 'Avoid the forgetting of missing the task' is awkward; better phrased as 'avoid forgetting or missing tasks'.