Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
Usually I make a shopping list when I go for a shopping uh. This is because I tend to forget to buy uh, some essential items without a list. Uh, for example, in the last week I forgot uh, to buy rice and that is why I tried to make my list and purchase everything.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
As I am working as an occupational health and research officer, it is very important for me to make a wish for my wife because I have to deal with a lot of work every day. Uh, and by making uh my priority list, I am able to do my important things fast and it helps me a lot.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
Actually, I don't have any idea why some people don't prefer any list, but I guess that these people are confident enough, uh, of their memory and they can, uh, purchase or, uh, they can, uh, work without, uh, preparing their list.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
I prefer to make my, uh, make my list, uh, on my phone, uh, because nowadays it is very convenient, uh, convenient, uh, to use, uh, To Do List, uh, for in the mobile phone and the writing in a paper. I have to carry this paper, but my phone is always with me, so I prefer to make.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Puntuación: 70.0Sugerencia: Try to reduce filler words like 'uh' and avoid redundancy. Make your answer more concise and natural by directly stating your habit and giving a specific example with clear linking words.
Ejemplo: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because I often forget essential items. For instance, last week I forgot to buy rice, so making a list helps me remember everything I need.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: Clarify your answer by removing confusing phrases like 'make a wish for my wife' and focus on explaining how making a priority list helps you manage work. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.
Ejemplo: Yes, I make a priority list for my work because I have many tasks daily. By organizing my tasks, I can complete important work quickly and efficiently, which really helps me stay productive.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: Avoid filler words and be more specific in your explanation. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and provide a clear reason why some people avoid lists.
Ejemplo: I think some people avoid making lists because they trust their memory. For example, they might feel confident enough to remember tasks or shopping items without writing them down.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: Reduce repetition and filler words. Make your answer more fluent by clearly stating your preference and reasons, using linking words to connect ideas smoothly.
Ejemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient. Since I always carry my phone, I can easily access my to-do list anytime, unlike paper lists which I might forget or lose.
× in the last week I forgot uh, to buy rice and that is why I tried to make my list and purchase everything
✓ last week I forgot to buy rice and that is why I tried to make my list and purchase everything
The phrase 'in the last week' is awkward and incorrect for past tense reference; 'last week' is the correct expression to indicate a specific past time. Also, 'uh' fillers should be omitted for clarity.
× it is very important for me to make a wish for my wife because I have to deal with a lot of work every day
✓ it is very important for me to make a list for my work because I have to deal with a lot of work every day
The original sentence incorrectly uses 'make a wish for my wife' which does not fit the context. The intended meaning is likely 'make a list for my work'. The preposition 'for' is correctly used with 'list' here.
× Actually, I don't have any idea why some people don't prefer any list
✓ Actually, I don't have any idea why some people don't prefer to make any list
The verb 'prefer' is usually followed by an infinitive verb form ('to make') rather than a noun alone. Adding 'to make' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.
× I prefer to make my, uh, make my list, uh, on my phone, uh, because nowadays it is very convenient, uh, convenient, uh, to use, uh, To Do List, uh, for in the mobile phone and the writing in a paper
✓ I prefer to make my list on my phone because nowadays it is very convenient to use a To Do List app on the mobile phone rather than writing on paper
The original sentence has redundant fillers and incorrect prepositions such as 'for in the mobile phone' and 'the writing in a paper'. The corrected sentence uses proper prepositions and clearer phrasing.