List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat relevant but incomplete and lacks clarity. Try to keep your answers concise and complete within 5 sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide a clear example. Avoid trailing off without finishing your thought.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me stay organized and remember what I need to buy. For instance, last week I went to the mall with my family and used my list to buy clothes and accessories without forgetting anything.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but has grammatical errors and is incomplete. Try to form complete sentences and avoid repetition. Use linking words to explain how making lists helps you. Keep your answer clear and concise.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a list for my studies because it helps me stay organized and reminds me of my assignments and homework. This way, I can manage my time better and complete tasks on time.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical mistakes and some redundancy. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid repeating words. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and provide clear reasons.

Ejemplo: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they feel it wastes time. Moreover, they find it difficult to follow a strict routine, so they think lists are not helpful for them.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and is somewhat unclear. Try to use simple and correct sentences. Use linking words to compare past and present preferences clearly.

Ejemplo: In the past, I preferred making lists on paper. However, nowadays I use my phone because there are many useful apps and note features that make it easier to organize my lists.

× For example, last week I visited one mall and the habit of.

✓ For example, last week I visited a mall and developed the habit.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a proper verb phrase to complete the thought. 'The habit of' is a fragment and does not convey a complete idea. The correction completes the sentence by adding 'developed the habit' to make it meaningful and grammatically correct.

× Yes, obviously I always prefer to make a list for my work especially for my studies because I'm a student and it it helpful in many ways.

✓ Yes, obviously I always prefer to make a list for my work, especially for my studies because I'm a student and it is helpful in many ways.

The phrase 'it it helpful' contains a repetition and a missing verb form. The correct form is 'it is helpful'. Also, a comma is added after 'work' for clarity.

× It also helps to organized and helps to come and remind me to help my assignment and homework and that's why I make a.

✓ It also helps me stay organized and reminds me to complete my assignments and homework, and that's why I make a list.

The phrase 'helps to organized' is incorrect; 'organized' should be in the base form 'organize' or used as an adjective with 'stay'. Also, 'helps to come and remind me to help my assignment' is unclear and incorrect. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects the preposition and verb usage.

× Well, in my perspective, many people don't like to making list on the regular basis because they think that it's waste of time and some some people can't regular follow that timetable or their routine according to the list.

✓ Well, from my perspective, many people don't like making lists regularly because they think it's a waste of time, and some people can't regularly follow the timetable or their routine according to the list.

The phrase 'in my perspective' is better expressed as 'from my perspective'. 'Don't like to making' is incorrect; it should be 'don't like making'. 'On the regular basis' should be 'regularly'. 'It's waste of time' needs an article: 'it's a waste of time'. 'Can't regular follow' should be 'can't regularly follow'.

× That's why they think they still not helpful.

✓ That's why they think it is still not helpful.

The pronoun 'they' is incorrectly used to refer to 'making lists' which is singular; 'it' should be used. Also, 'still not helpful' needs the verb 'is' to be grammatically correct.

× Well, nowadays the era is going to all about the social networking and the smartphones.

✓ Well, nowadays the era is all about social networking and smartphones.

The phrase 'is going to all about' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'is all about'. Also, 'the social networking' and 'the smartphones' do not need definite articles here.

× So well in the past, I always prefer to make a list in the paper, but now but in the recent year, I tried to figure out all the list on my phone because there are many apps or as well as the notes are available in into smartphones that helps.

✓ So, well, in the past, I always preferred to make a list on paper, but recently, I have tried to keep all my lists on my phone because there are many apps and notes available on smartphones that help.

'Prefer to make a list in the paper' should be 'on paper'. 'In the recent year' is better as 'recently'. 'Tried to figure out all the list' is unclear; 'tried to keep all my lists' is clearer. 'Available in into smartphones' is incorrect; 'available on smartphones' is correct. Also, 'helps' should be 'help' to agree with plural subject 'apps and notes'.