List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and clarify your points. For example, explain briefly why being organised helps you shop effectively.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a list before shopping because, as an INTJ, I like to be organised. This helps me save time by avoiding indecision when choosing products in the supermarket.

Sugerencia: Focus on clarity and grammatical accuracy. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Avoid unclear phrases like 'take the each list' and 'brings me a great off'. Instead, explain how completing your list affects you positively.

Ejemplo: Yes, I make a weekly work list and try to finish all tasks before the deadline. Completing the list gives me a great sense of satisfaction and achievement.

Sugerencia: Improve naturalness by simplifying your explanation and avoiding repetition. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to connect ideas clearly. Also, correct minor grammar mistakes and clarify your points.

Ejemplo: I think some people dislike making lists because they have a 'Perceiving' personality type, which means they are more flexible and adaptable. So, they prefer to handle situations as they come rather than planning everything in advance.

Sugerencia: Make your answer more natural by correcting grammar and sentence structure. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly and provide specific details about the app's features.

Ejemplo: As a member of Generation Z, I definitely prefer making lists on my phone. For example, I use the 'List' app on my iPhone, which lets me write down daily tasks and sends automatic reminders to help me complete them on time.

× Yes, this is the things I would do every time before shopping because I am an INTJ means I do things very organized so it helps me to be more effective when I go to the shopping instead of wasting time on on choosing which product I want in the supermarket.

✓ Yes, these are the things I would do every time before shopping because I am an INTJ, which means I do things very organised, so it helps me to be more effective when I go shopping instead of wasting time choosing which product I want in the supermarket.

The phrase 'this is the things' is incorrect because 'things' is plural and should be paired with 'these are'. Also, 'go to the shopping' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go shopping'. Additionally, 'organized' should be 'organised' in British English. The sentence also needed commas for clarity.

× Yes, this is the things I would do every time before shopping because I am an INTJ means I do things very organized so it helps me to be more effective when I go to the shopping instead of wasting time on on choosing which product I want in the supermarket.

✓ Yes, these are the things I would do every time before shopping because I am an INTJ, which means I do things very organised, so it helps me to be more effective when I go shopping instead of wasting time choosing which product I want in the supermarket.

The phrase 'wasting time on on choosing' is incorrect; the preposition 'on' is unnecessary before 'choosing'. The correct form is 'wasting time choosing'. Also, 'go to the shopping' is incorrect; 'go shopping' is the correct expression.

× Yes, I have a weekly list of my work, so I will try to complete it before the deadline and take the each list.

✓ Yes, I have a weekly list of my work, so I will try to complete it before the deadline and take each list.

The phrase 'take the each list' is incorrect because 'each' should not be preceded by 'the'. The correct phrase is 'take each list'.

× If I complete it, it brings me a great off.

✓ If I complete it, it brings me a great sense of relief.

The phrase 'a great off' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is likely 'a great sense of relief' or 'a great feeling of accomplishment'. Using 'sense of relief' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× It brings me a great sense of satisfaction and achievement every time when I complete all of things on time.

✓ It brings me a great sense of satisfaction and achievement every time I complete all things on time.

The phrase 'all of things' is incorrect; it should be 'all things' or 'all of the things'. Also, 'every time when' is redundant; 'every time' alone is sufficient.

× I guess because they are P person means perceiving in the MBTI personalities.

✓ I guess it's because they are P types, which means perceiving in the MBTI personality types.

The phrase 'they are P person' is incorrect; 'person' should be plural or replaced with 'types'. Also, 'means' should be connected properly with 'which means'. The phrase 'MBTI personalities' is better as 'MBTI personality types'.

× This type of personalities refers to a people with higher flexibility and adaptability.

✓ This type of personality refers to people with higher flexibility and adaptability.

'Type' is singular, so it should be 'type of personality' (singular), not 'personalities' (plural). Also, 'a people' is incorrect; 'people' is plural and does not take 'a'.

× Therefore, whenever there is a situation emergent situation happens, they are the most suitable person to address the issue.

✓ Therefore, whenever an emergent situation happens, they are the most suitable people to address the issue.

The phrase 'a situation emergent situation' is redundant and incorrectly ordered; it should be 'an emergent situation'. Also, 'person' should be plural 'people' to agree with 'they'.

× As a generation ZI definitely prefer make list on my phone.

✓ As a Generation Z, I definitely prefer to make lists on my phone.

'Generation ZI' is likely a typo for 'Generation Z'. Also, 'prefer make list' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer to make lists'. The plural 'lists' is more natural here.

× There is a app called List on iPhone so I will write down anything I would do everyday and it will send the automatic reminder for me to complete the task within that line.

✓ There is an app called List on the iPhone, so I write down anything I need to do every day, and it sends automatic reminders for me to complete the tasks on time.

'a app' is incorrect; before a vowel sound, 'an' is used. 'iPhone' should be preceded by 'the' when referring to the device. 'would do everyday' is better as 'need to do every day'. 'automatic reminder' should be plural 'automatic reminders'. 'within that line' is unclear; 'on time' or 'by the deadline' is better.