List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to make your sentences more concise and avoid repeating words. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why making a list helps you, and conclude with a benefit.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a to-do list when I go shopping because it helps me save time by planning ahead. Moreover, having a list ensures I don't forget any items, making my shopping more organized and efficient.

Sugerencia: Your answer is too short and repetitive. Try to provide more specific details and avoid repeating the same phrases. Use linking words to explain how making a list benefits your work.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me prioritize tasks and manage my time effectively. As a result, I can complete my work more efficiently and avoid forgetting important duties.

Sugerencia: Your answer has many repetitions and unclear phrases. Try to express your ideas clearly and avoid repeating words. Use linking words to connect your points logically and provide specific reasons why some people dislike making lists.

Ejemplo: Well, it depends on the person's nature. Some people feel that making lists wastes time because they believe they could use that time more productively. Additionally, they may find list-making unnecessary if they prefer to work spontaneously.

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by avoiding filler words and making sentences more concise. Use linking words to explain why you prefer your phone over paper for making lists.

Ejemplo: Since we live in a modern era, I usually make my lists on my mobile phone using the reminder app. This method is more convenient than paper because I can access and update my lists anytime and anywhere.

× Yes I make To Do List whenever I go to shopping because it helps me a lot in deciding as pre planning of activities quite help me in saving my time in finding the goods and things that I want.

✓ Yes, I make a To-Do List whenever I go shopping because it helps me a lot in deciding, as pre-planning activities quite help me save my time in finding the goods and things that I want.

The phrase 'To Do List' should be 'a To-Do List' to indicate a singular countable noun. Also, 'go to shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'go shopping' because 'shopping' is used as an activity here without 'to'. The phrase 'pre planning of activities' should be 'pre-planning activities' to correctly use the noun form. The verb 'help' should be 'help me save' to correctly express the action. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Apart from this it it is a very structural manner to go to go to shopping because it the things we have already.

✓ Apart from this, it is a very structured manner to go shopping because of the things we already have.

The phrase 'structural manner' is incorrect; it should be 'structured manner' to use the correct adjective. 'Go to go to shopping' is repetitive and incorrect; it should be 'go shopping'. The phrase 'because it the things we have already' is incomplete and unclear; it should be 'because of the things we already have' to make sense. These corrections fix plural and singular issues and improve sentence structure.

× Well it depend.

✓ Well, it depends.

The verb 'depend' needs to agree with the third person singular subject 'it', so it should be 'depends'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue related to modal verb usage.

× Some people usually think it is a waste of wastage of time because spending spending time too much time on making list can hinder their activities.

✓ Some people usually think it is a waste of time because spending too much time making a list can hinder their activities.

The phrase 'waste of wastage of time' is redundant; 'waste of time' is correct. 'Spending spending time too much time' is repetitive and incorrect; it should be 'spending too much time'. 'Making list' should be 'making a list' to use the singular countable noun correctly. These corrections address plural and singular issues and remove redundancy.

× Apart from this when while while beside making the list they can use they can do other productive works.

✓ Apart from this, while making the list, they can do other productive work.

The phrase 'when while while beside' is incorrect and redundant; only one conjunction is needed, here 'while' is appropriate. 'Other productive works' should be 'other productive work' because 'work' is uncountable in this context. These corrections fix conjunction misuse and pluralization.

× Well in that as it is a modernized era so I usually make the list on my mobile phone in my reminder app as it is way more convenient than a paper and pen.

✓ Well, as it is a modern era, I usually make the list on my mobile phone using my reminder app as it is way more convenient than paper and pen.

The phrase 'Well in that as it is a modernized era so' is awkward; 'Well, as it is a modern era,' is clearer. 'In my reminder app' should be 'using my reminder app' to correctly express the tool used. 'Than a paper and pen' should be 'than paper and pen' because 'paper and pen' are uncountable in this context. These corrections improve preposition use and sentence clarity.