List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy, such as 'avoid avoiding'. Try to use simpler and correct expressions like 'helps me avoid impulse buying'. Also, keep your answer concise and natural.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me stay within my budget and avoid impulse buying.

Sugerencia: Your answer has some grammar mistakes like 'write down of tasks' and 'track of those tasks'. Use correct phrases such as 'write down tasks' and 'keep track of tasks'. Also, try to use linking words to improve coherence, for example, 'so that' or 'which'.

Ejemplo: Yes, definitely. I write down my tasks every morning so that when I feel overwhelmed, I can keep track of them, which helps me stay organized.

Sugerencia: Your answer has some awkward phrasing and repetition, such as 'task making as time consuming' and 'they they'. Try to say 'making lists is time-consuming' and avoid repeating words. Also, use linking words like 'because' to connect ideas clearly.

Ejemplo: I think some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming and prefer to start tasks immediately without writing them down first.

Sugerencia: Your answer has some grammar errors like 'help it easier' and 'press down the completed text'. Use correct expressions such as 'helps me rearrange tasks easily' and 'check off completed tasks'. Also, try to use linking words like 'because' to explain reasons clearly.

Ejemplo: I prefer using a mobile app to write my lists because it helps me rearrange tasks easily and gives me a sense of accomplishment when I check off completed tasks.

× Yes, I always try to make a list when I shop because it helps me to stay in the budget while avoid avoiding impulse buying.

✓ Yes, I always try to make a list when I shop because it helps me to stay in the budget while avoiding impulse buying.

The phrase 'while avoid avoiding' is incorrect because after 'while' we need a verb in the '-ing' form to indicate simultaneous actions. The correct form is 'while avoiding impulse buying'. This is a common mistake where the base form 'avoid' is incorrectly used instead of the gerund 'avoiding'. To improve, remember that after prepositions like 'while', verbs should be in the '-ing' form.

× Yes, definitely. I always write down of tasks every morning so whenever I get overwhelmed I try to track of those tasks and it helps me to be organized.

✓ Yes, definitely. I always write down tasks every morning so whenever I get overwhelmed I try to keep track of those tasks and it helps me to be organized.

The phrase 'write down of tasks' is incorrect because 'write down' is a phrasal verb that does not require the preposition 'of'. Also, 'try to track of those tasks' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'try to keep track of those tasks'. The preposition 'of' is used with 'keep track', not with 'write down' or 'try to track'. To improve, learn the correct collocations: 'write down tasks' and 'keep track of tasks'.

× I believe they think task making as time consuming so they they would dive into the tasks rather than writing them down 1st.

✓ I believe they think making tasks is time consuming, so they would dive into the tasks rather than writing them down first.

The phrase 'think task making as time consuming' is ungrammatical. The correct structure is 'think making tasks is time consuming'. Also, 'they they' is a repetition error, and '1st' should be written as 'first' in formal speech. To improve, use the correct verb complement structure after 'think' and avoid repeated words. Also, write numbers in words in formal contexts.

× I prefer writing them down on mobile app because it help it easier to rearrange the tasks and it gives me a sense of accomplishment when I press down the completed text.

✓ I prefer writing them down on a mobile app because it helps me to rearrange the tasks more easily and it gives me a sense of accomplishment when I mark the tasks as completed.

The phrase 'on mobile app' lacks an article; it should be 'on a mobile app'. Also, 'help it easier' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'helps me to rearrange the tasks more easily'. Additionally, 'press down the completed text' is unclear; a better expression is 'mark the tasks as completed'. To improve, use articles correctly, ensure subject-verb agreement, and choose appropriate verbs and expressions for clarity.